Reviews for Union between a Samurai and Princess
KumaNoKami chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
that was a good reading.
draco122 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
great story
draco122
warriorx559 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Great story, i liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Your NaruTayu stories are really good. I am surprised that they don't have that many reviews
grimangel163 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
It was nice
10tailed-Jokester chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Nice story
Goldrune09 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Poorly written but still passable as far as lemon's go.
Prosthetic Forehead chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
This had an interesting set up.

But you wasted it, honestly. You had Tayuya attempt to kill him turn into... smut. It was kind of a hollow moment that just ruined everything.

Sure, I can understand this story was meant to be smut-focused but you could have delayed it a little longer for the reader's benefit. To establish a reason why Tayuya would suddenly submit to someone who conquered her clan. But even better than that, you could have had some conflict between them, verbal sparring and such. It would have been interesting to see that play out.

But it didn't. Oh well.
Kyukon chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Haha, Tayuya as a princess? That's priceless! Good job with the lemon.
Tenro100 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
nice
A NarutoxTayuya fan chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
This was cool hope you write more one shots with NarutoxTayuya
Southern Temple of Greatness chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I thought Tayuya would swear more, but great story.
Hellcleaner chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
nice story
Leaf Ranger chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Other then the wrong use of some word, this was excellent. Not bad for a first time lemon.

Hopefully, we'll see more NaruTayu lemons in your other stories? *Grins*
Danfrogger chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
not bad i like the story