|Reviews for Turn|
| Hennan chapter 14 . 10/12
Thank you for this amazing and brilliant story. You are a fantastic writer.
| Caitieoh chapter 14 . 9/29
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I just looooooved this.
| ccztlover chapter 14 . 9/20
.god. I can't belive it took me this long to fond this fic! It is amazing, I've spent a few nights of nearly no sleep at all reading, I could not for the life of me put it down..
Thank you for giving us such an enthralling story with lovable original characters and still staying true to J.K's world.
I blame you fully for my sleepless nights ;) but I loved every minute of them!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/16
This story was so amazing. I loved your details and your plot was flawless!
| AJ2015 chapter 14 . 9/13
This story is amazing...holy shit. Your talent astounds me. Please publish a story soon so I can support you by buying it! Your original characters flowed so well that I forgot they weren't canon. You also did an amazing job with the children. I usually don't like the way authors portray the children in these stories. However you understand how to write a child at all ages. I just can't get over your skill. I'm going to check out your other stuff for sure! Thank you
| Harley S. Quinn chapter 14 . 9/8
The best story ever. Reading this brings so much emotions in me, it just take my breath away... I've read it over and over!
| Tess G chapter 14 . 9/1
This whole story is beautiful. I can't even express how much i enjoyed it... I wish it wasn't over. It was honestly written so so so so well, and I hope the author writes published novels soon and I hope I get to read all of them. This plot was so detailed and thorough! When harry was sad, I was sad. When he was happy, so was I. It's hard to make the reader FEEL something in a story, but honestly this couldn't have been better. Thank you so much for writing this. Holy shit, thank you.
| allison chapter 14 . 8/30
i just recently discovered this and i have no words. Usually, fanfic isnt something i enjoy reading- i just get too distracted. However, when reading this i was never once left bored or annoyed. I basically accepted the book as the eighth harry potter book. This is a beautifully wrought and written piece of art (that i enjoyed much more than the cursed child)- and has also inspired me to take the unknown road in life. Thank you so so so much for this.3
| Harley S. Quinn chapter 14 . 8/27
For me this is the most touching story I have ever read. The characters are so human, so true. Thank you! xxx
| marveling chapter 14 . 8/19
Perfect - as all your pieces are.
| readingaccount chapter 14 . 8/16
This is the most fascinating, incredible, heart-warming story ever. I've read a lot of fics, and don't think I've ever found another quite this good. Your writing is beautiful beyond belief. Love your work!
| untriedwit chapter 14 . 7/23
I would like to thank you for this story. I have obsessed and fangirled, sighed and cried and laughed and yelled, over this fic. I have adored every moment of it and I'm so sad that it's over, but I can't really complain as it ended so perfectly.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I hope your Snape keyring continues to wear his cape, I hope you and Marie are happy, and I hope that some day we can all overlook the fact that you don't (technically) own Harry and Draco and all of their cannon friends.
Thanks for a wonderful read :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/21
I live and breathe for this story!
I absolutely adore your style of writing and the way you write all the HP cast. I'm rooting for Draco and Harry's relationship so hard.
I thought the family's reaction to the divorce was perfect and I loved James' response especially!
| MoonNott chapter 14 . 7/14
Soooooo I just finished Turn and.. I. I don't know how I should process this? *takes a deep breath* I should start with chapter 1 since I haven't left a chapter by chapter review which I try to do..
By the end of the first chapter I thought this is one of those "he gets thrown into an alternate reality and finds love etc" and I thought yay a fluff drarry! I've heard from SO many people that Sara's girl is the person to go to for excellent drarry stories that I'd happily settled into my blanket waiting for the well written fluffs to come out.
Then I moved to chapter 2, which I was properly giddy to note was LONG and so wonderfully paced that I was fucking lost in the characters. It made me ridiculously happy that you spent enough and more time expounding on the details and the conversations and what Harry was going through. The confusion, Hermione and Ginny and his conversation was heart warming and legitimately funny. And I thought Maura was a cute name. And that I reeeeally liked the kid's clear sightedness and how she reacted to the new Harry.
Then we went to chapter 3. And by this time I'd given up on chapter by chapter reviews which I thought I'd start from chapter 2 if I liked the story to begin with. I'm relatively new to Drarry fanfics. I've read a LOT of drabbles and comics and chat conversations with these two but this is only my second full length story. I say I gave up on chapter by chapter reviews cuz your chapters are beautifully long and the story so amazingly weaved that I couldn't bring myself to stop in the middle and I just decided I'll leave you a LONG review to try and make up for it. I was very surprised at the career you chose for Harry. I don't know if I can imagine him as an artistic/creative person but living a relatively calmer, less attention seeking life I can imagine. The way you addressed Draco's OCD was actually very endearing... I'm not saying I COMPLETELY understand it but I feel his distress for things not being in order, I have OCD tendencies. And ugh I did not care for Anthony, prat extraordinaire. But I VERY much cared for the fact that Fred was alive in the alternate reality. It was very cruel of jkr to kill him off.. Also, I find Boris very amusing. He has a kind of dry humour which I'm a fan of. How do you create your characters really? They're so relatable, or rather real!
I think the FUNNIEST character by far though is Frankfurto. The snake's proclivity for the dramatics makes me feel a sense of camaraderie.. He's by far my favourite! A snake after my own heart! I don't recall having come across a more vain snake LOL. The course of Draco and Harry's relationship is so well paced! Like I still can't get over it. You're a witch at plot management and I think you have magic.
Oh MERLIN I'D PAY MONEY TO BE LIVE AUDIENCE AT LUCIUS AND HARRY'S UH SONG OFF! Also, Narcissa's wit, soooooo good.. Do you have a picture of the lamp you based Draco's gift on? Or was it only in your head? I hope there's one cuz I'm very interested.. You broke my heart when I found out this was just a glimpse of what could have been and that Harry will have to go back. Oh how you broke my heart! Is there also a picture of the weird thing he sold Mr pepper? And the thing he named Lily? Oh I just want pictures for EVERY thing that went on in your mind! I like having an image to put to the words.. It's a compulsion.
The restaurant scene was SO funny. But then... Oh God so much heartbreak.. I silent cried, ugly cried, outright sobbed when Harry left the note for Maura. Must you people make us cry? It must be a rule or something. By time I was halfway through the story though I'd decided I'm going to read EVERY thing you've written. So I've got my work cut out for me..
I honestly thought once he's back to reality, there's going to be more angst BUT it wasn't! And wow, the kids took it so well. Teenagers can be difficult and usually react the worst I've read but James wasn't an arsekettle about it and it was a pleasant surprise. I think we don't give kids enough credit.. But then it's hard to find a rebellious teen being all mature and understanding. Oh I seem to have forgotten Helga. She's very amusing too... You know it's easier to say I like ALL your characters. You've cast them well.. But i might not have peace if I don't mention Blaise by name. I appreciated his dramatics too.. :D They aren't too OOC, Harry and Ron retain their canonical sass, Draco his attitude and Narcissa (even though she isn't really described in canon) sounded like she usually does in my head. I honestly CANNOT have enough of Harry as an active Parselmouth. Reason why I like Keira Marcos' work. I think it's a cool power to have..
In any case, I was honestly very surprised he went and told Blaise out of all people, pleasantly surprised. Apparently you did a lot of pleasantly-surprising-me things in the story.. Heh.. I have squealed into my pillow on quite a few occasions too but I can't recall them all right now because I read this whole thing in one go and haha weeeeell it's right now one big jumbled thing in my head, not a series of events. Having said all this, I REALLY LIKED THE STORY. IT IS SOMETHING I'LL READ OVER AND OVER AGAIN WHEN I WANT TO READ A NICE SLOW BURN HUMOROUS DRARRY! Your A/Ns were pretty amusing too. searching for your marbles comes to mind. :D I miss Maura though.. *pouts* Also I, a 24 year old, reeeeally think their parties sound hella fun.
My only regret is that I didn't review each chapter cuz I'd have liked shouting my reactions and generally dramatising the moments I liked. WHICH I will work on in your next story that I read! oh god I'm so sad it ended but so so SO FUCKING happy how it turned out.. You are a WONDERFUL writer, I'm sure a lot of people have told you and I'm only reinforcing that opinion. THANK YOU for giving us this beautiful, amazing, shatteringly beautiful piece of your heart.
| LillyTigress chapter 14 . 7/13
most likely the third time i have read this and i still love it. gives me the warm fuzzies every time - nice when a happy ending seems like a real possibility