|Reviews for A Little More Comedy|
| Deda Altesse chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
... Wow... Wow Edgar, just wow... :
| Flameear chapter 20 . 12/9/2012
It was so cute sniff thanks for writing it :) looking forward to more of your works
| Cheerah chapter 20 . 9/22/2012
This is THE BEST story I've read in a LONG time! Seriously LOVE this fic- its well written, hilarious, witty, emotionaly and I just loved every bit of drama! And you portrayed them so, well like them! I honestly (and embarrassingly) fangirled soo many times. Also sorry for not commenting on the other chapters- I didn't want to stop reading welp I think I rambled on long enough just wanted to let ya know that I really loved this story (you don't see too many Edgar/Mmy fic floating around) but I liked more than just because of the pairing, honestly I never really cared much for Jimmy, but your story made me love him. And Im just going to leave now because I can't seem to stop typing. Bye now!
| Dragonist chapter 20 . 8/23/2012
Oh my god, this was so amazing. I couldn't stop myself from grinning ecstatically the whole last half of this chapter! Yay Johnny, and Jimmy was so freaking adorable! Now I want to have a semi illegal relationship with my school counselour, except the five of them are all not awesome and funny and cute but instead really middle aged and kind of mean. (
So, I guess I'll just have to volunteer as a counselor and be the older, responsible one. ;)
Yay you! This story was amazingly happy for so unhappy a series!
| Karma Kat 281 chapter 20 . 8/14/2012
Oh my, this was beautiful. The ending was so sweet! I wish Edgar didn't get so hung up with what society deems wrong. I mean, does it seem wrong to love Jimmy? No? Then it's probably not wrong! But I seriously love this story. Thanks for completing it!
| Jynx'sbox chapter 20 . 8/9/2012
The end of an awesome story. And I agree with Jimmy, can't say Johnny never did them any favors.
Double negative, I suck at grammar.
Your updates kick me in the rear and keep me going man, you have no idea. Your stories in general keep this OTP alive.
I propose a toast to the smug bastard who managed to change my OTP to Edgar/Jimmy. I have no idea how you do it, I probably never will, but your story-telling is top notch. BRAVA!
| darkbangle chapter 20 . 8/8/2012
You know, I think what I love best about this story is the way you are able to portray the difference in age between Jimmy and Edgar realistically, and the way that Edgar continues to battle through the moral implications of the romance he finds himself inexplicably drawn into. It's the changes in Edgar, I suppose, that fascinate me the most, and I kind of feel like the spirit of that change had been somewhat encapsulated in this last chapter. :) Beautifully done.
| Turquoise.ebonyfox chapter 19 . 8/8/2012
Interesting beginning to an ending. It's sad what Edgar has to go through :/
| FAmedileen chapter 19 . 8/7/2012
yay ur back! I loved this chapter I laughed and got emotional... ur so amazing
| darkbangle chapter 19 . 8/7/2012
adsfjhgje. I just marathoned through this and... Mmy/Edgar, I totally ship it now. So, thank you.
| FattySkeleton chapter 19 . 8/7/2012
well that was one hell of a one eighty.
but wow, this will be good. I find that maybe edgar will be out of his element but then again there is so much we don't know about him.
i can't wait to see what they'll run into, and just what's out there. man they could meet dib and zim,
they could find hanna and zombie.
they could run across satan or god.
they could, oh wait, where are they? Like on a map? east coast or west coast? cause they could either hang out with the califonians and smoke pot, or go down to the bible belt and get the shit beat out of them selves. or i suppose they could hang out in the big easy.
or hell, go to canada!
| Jynx'sbox chapter 19 . 8/6/2012
I nearly had a heart attack when I saw that this was updated. You always make updates worth the wait!
Edgar has totally been screwed over but hey, any nudge towards Jimmy is worth it in my book. So long as he doesn't go to jail cause that would totally defeat the purpose.
Final chapter soon, you say? Well okay, you didn't explicitly say soon but I hope it is soon. I feel like an addict with no fix here man.
| MAV Reviewer chapter 19 . 8/6/2012
Ultimate. Fan girl. Squeal.
Like seriously, I was writhing in my bed when I got your update.
I love this new addition so badly. So many feels!
I'm in no state to leave a well thought out review because my mind just exploded from sheer awesomeness.
Just...just...yes. This is yes.
| amedileen chapter 18 . 7/17/2012
I-I miss you so much des! I just realized how old this story is B-but I love it! keep writing plz..
| The One Who Dwells In Darkness chapter 18 . 7/8/2012
Please, please, please, for the love of all that is holy and unholy, update this. I definitely need a little more comedy in my life, and this story is wonderful.