|Reviews for Nobody Loves A Moron|
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 2 . 13h ago
| Shaindy chapter 2 . 2/17
Best. Story. Ever.
My favourite stories have always been short stories. And if a short story can hide its twist, its surprise until the last line, it's a winner.
Yours is a winner.
Not lying when I said this is the best story ever. I did not see that last line coming at all. Utterly brilliant and had me yelling at the computer screen. I'm surprised I didn't wake my kids up.
Thank you so much for posting such a brilliant story - it will be one I'll come back to read over and over.
| lillelouis chapter 1 . 1/29
Why is there not an entire 'verse dedicated to this?!
| Lolapola chapter 2 . 1/28
Wow. Yeah, the story was good, yeah I liked seeing the Winchesters from another point of view, but that last sentence - wow! It may seem like I'm overreacting slightly but it's so common that there's a twist in a story, particularly fanfiction, that you either saw coming a mile off, and it's the whole point of a character, or you're surprised but then you go back and there's absolutely no reference to it whatsoever, almost like the author just chucked it in for the sake of it. Yours was absolutely perfectly written - the character and his story worked without the twist, but is given a whole new dimension because of the twist. Plus, you could go back and there were loads of little hints and things that suddenly made sense that just seemed like an innocuous line - but again, not so many that I was reading it going, "What the hell is going on here? Is this going to get explained?" Some serious skills here - keep writing! :D xxx
| Serenity Starke chapter 2 . 1/26
This was excellent. I really liked the way you ended it. I was surprised but not. Very well done.
| zemyrocks chapter 2 . 1/19
OMG THIS WAS AMAAAAAAAZING! The ending was fabulous and the characters were spot on, thank you for this amazing story!
| AngelusThursday chapter 2 . 1/19
THIS IS FANTASTIC. WOW. HOW YO EXPRESS INYO WORDS I CANNOT.
I love this so much you are brilliant.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I LOVE this!
| HolleyS chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
I really love this! you did such a great job getting the OC's right and keeping Sam and Dean in character :)
I find it funny how people keep calling Sam a giant, I have five brothers who are either 6'4 or will be at least 6'6 when they finish growing, so to me Sam seems a normal height.
| rockandrosie chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
I love this story so much. nice plot twist at the end.
| SuperPenguin chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
did NOT see that coming. absolutely FANtasTIC
| You are awesome chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I love the almost satirical sense of humor and the totally befuddled bad guys. :)
| Rasei chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
Those last couple of lines in chapter 2 really throws the story into an even better prospective. There is hints all throw out the chapter, 'specially after that whole what-do-little-brothers-do-for-big-brothers thing; but you cannot really pick it up until you get to those last line.
The writing is pretty good, and like the OCs for the most part. Thank you for sharing this story with us,
| Alyss Penedo chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Nice. Wasn't expecting that little twist at the end XP
I love how you've done the whole evasive-conversation thing; that was masterfully written and planned. Kudos!
| Hinata001 chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Love the twist at the end. Definitely didn't see that coming.