|Reviews for The Heart In The Whole|
| RuthAnneS chapter 21 . 7/31
I've just read this again (third time) and I still absolutely adore it.
| Cocosair chapter 21 . 9/13/2020
Loved it all!
| Ima-Pottergirl-Ina-Potterworld chapter 1 . 4/28/2020
This was... Amazing! I love the story! Like the build up and the plot was great! I absolutely loved it!
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/8/2020
I loved it! Thank you for writing it ️
| Lisiane chapter 21 . 9/1/2019
Such a beautiful story!
| Lady.Of.The.Lands chapter 21 . 7/24/2019
When I read a story that has been done for a long time I normally refrain from gushing or Critiquing what ever aspect jumped out at me. But for you and for this story I really can’t help myself.
I adore this story. I love Johnlock, but most writers don’t handle the two of them as a couple well. You are one of the more notable exceptions. Both of our boys at Baker Street are very in character and were put into the intimacy realistically. I guess I had resigned myself to the total twisting of their characters to facilitate a romantic relationship that your story grabbed me by the lapels and threw me into a wall. Not that Sherlock or John is exactly like cannon because in cannon Johnlock is, while feasible, not exactly in character. No the twisting is subtle and logical, not sudden and in taking of liberties.
Sherlock is still Sherlock in your story his intellect is still there he is still sarcastic, cutting, he insults Anderson and Donovan in a biting way, insensitive, and careless of the feelings of others, he is all those things but he in your story so devoted to John that he makes an effort to apologize to Sally for his verbal slapping. that he softens himself to please John but still being himself is so beautiful to me. (if any of that makes sense good for you you have more deductive reasoning than most of my family) (oh- - and thank you if you are still reading my rant on how perfect John and Sherlock are done in your story) (:
Have a good day James
May the Three Friends smile upon your path
| uz97 chapter 15 . 11/21/2018
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/28/2018
| ilicythings chapter 21 . 10/18/2018
Absolutely loved this!
That's all I need to say.
| Mell C chapter 21 . 9/2/2018
Thanks for a great story. Really enjoyed.
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/16/2018
Wowwww! I enjoyed this so much!
| deimdre chapter 17 . 7/5/2018
I really did like the setup, but the story felt very repetitive and quite stagnant, like it was physically unable to move forward.
| KathGiovan chapter 20 . 4/22/2018
best story i have ever read on . hope you become an amazing author one day! xx
| BarbyBells chapter 21 . 3/25/2018
They're the cutest couple ever! I absolutely loved everything about this story! All the build up,the sad parts,the action parts,the sappy parts and everything in between! thank you for writing this! it was absolutely amazing!
| Waples.J chapter 21 . 8/5/2017
I loved this so much. Thank you for being such a good writer. I have tried to write stories of blind Sherlock but I just can't seem to get anything right. But this has given me some inspiration. thank you