Reviews for Zabuza's Seven
Stone chapter 10 . 9/22/2014
Sewing Needle could be that one spear nosed fishe. Lightning Sword could be Electric Eels. Splash could be a whalreal jumping out of the water, the splash is from the landing. And the Head Splitter could be a hammer head shark
Eien Michi chapter 6 . 6/3/2014
I never understood why they couldn't just look at and memorize the handseals the enemies were using. Sure some are really fast, but I'm sure a Ninja's eye is good enough to catch at least hand seals done at Chuunin speed.
Eien Michi chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
First brownie point: Haku is NOT genderbent.
Second: From what I read atm, I can assume that this will not be a "love at first sight" fic.

Tho the beginning could appear like the start of a cliché fic, the summary tells me that it is actually not.
yindragonkiba chapter 16 . 5/6/2014
Nice. But. Strange
HikaruWinter chapter 8 . 3/20/2014
Well, Haku means 'pure as white snow' so.. maybe Yoko? It's close to Youko -meaning, evil fox spirit- but it actually means 'sunny child', which is actually quite fitting. More than Akane, at least -even if it's a very pretty name (red sky). Or Momiji (red leaves in autumn).
And I'm kind of a nerd. And ramble on a regular basis. My apologies.
Bando chapter 16 . 2/19/2014
Great story plesae keep up the good work and don't make us wait for long.
XxXx HikaruHanto xXxX chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
can we talk about possibly writing a story together?
irnzenmonk chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
very good ne
Vangran chapter 16 . 10/15/2013
I really like this story, not just because it is basically the only Naru/Amaru pairing I have come across. The scene with 'Shinno' was quite good as it got her closer to Naruto and now Naruto has been adopted by Mei, who I think is frankly hilarious with her misinterpretations of anything Ao says, I imagine things will only get better for the young now-whisker-less blond.
AJGuardian chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
Yes. It was emotional. Not as emotional as Naruto meeting Kushina.
Witnessfox22 chapter 16 . 9/8/2013
To be honest I usually only sick to romance stories on here (yes, call me a creeper if you like), but this has got to be one of the best Alternate Universe stories I have ever read! The characters, plot, and over all development of the characters it fantastic and I'm hoping for an update!
H.E.A chapter 16 . 7/19/2013
The lightning from the Kiba(fangs) will also help keeping people from getting a good look at him while he's using any of the swords lightning because its light will blind so it's like looking at some one with a flash light between and behiend them. Any way love the story please give naruto the Kiba(Fangs).
H.E.A chapter 16 . 7/19/2013
Naruto should wield Kiba(the fangs), it would save you the trouble of writing another few chapters to retrieve another sword and the fangs are one of the cooler ones and also they fit him better then the exploding sword or the hammer ax sword, the shark sword the itachis par ther k-something has would be too hard to get their hands on and that leaves the atakiak for later, also I don't think naruto is suited to use the sharks word, the sewing need might do but again you a,ready got the fang do you need to write another chapter or two to get that sword, and it doesn't match narutos style, he's not the type that go for vitals with every strike, the fangs can o that, their fast, good size, will exlexacute his target when they are hot no matter where, it probable the best blade for him. Also I think he would look so bad asss with them strapped in an X on his back with his mist head band and out fit. By the way when is he going to sharpen his teeth like the other swordsmen? A any way love the story and how your doing it.
david.teague.3950 chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
I'm not that good at guessing different spellings but isn't the form of Empathy you were aiming for empathetic? Actually I take that back you might be right with its spelling as there's a show(charmed) and one of the powers in the show is the power of Empath which allows a person to literally feel the emotions of those around them.
XxXx HikaruHanto xXxX chapter 16 . 6/25/2013
The heroine is Sakura if I'm not mistaken
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