Reviews for I Hear Him Scream
Nerf Wraith Hitbox chapter 1 . 5/24/2021
You may never see this but I feel obligated to write something here. this was the first real fanfiction I ever read and it really turned me on to writing and it inspired me to write. the story you spent years working on I'm sure inspired others including myself to write or continue reading other people's works. I thank you for making this, you have opened up so many doors for me and I won't forget it. the story feels cannon and it deserves a solid 9/10 fantastic job.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah chapter 11 . 2/21/2021
Fyi: every instance of 'sheath' up to this point in the story has been wrong. Just wanted to let you know before I forgot.

To sheath something, is to put it inside of something else, such as a swords scabbard, or maybe a night fury's gums.
To unsheeth, is to remove it from said receptical.

'He unsheathed his sword, so all could see it'
'she sheathed her dagger, to protect it from rust'

Make sense?

Anyway, I'm enjoying the story. Thanks for putting it out there.
JustAnotherRandomPoster chapter 10 . 2/10/2021
I think the past tense of "lie" is "lay", not "lied".
Echo chapter 1 . 1/25/2021
I didnt remember me. or you. I still don't see. just a lonely guess. I know. youre there., somewhere. searching... banging.

Its not what workss. I just cfant., Im broke. Brokken. Lost.

was. am. I dont know how to get back up anymore.. they killed my soul. killed my fire. I cant even look out the window. im brokenand I let it die. i couldnt fight ., i didnt even know what happened. or who anytone wa. im here. in the house by the skyt. lost. stuck. no fire left and my king is gone. im lost and the lonely., the lost boys lost too.

my lonly never found the lost in us too. cause lost was lost where lonely never knew. i waited so lonely and lost took you too.
Vognar-The Legendkeep chapter 2 . 1/24/2021
Having read this back in 2018 was a blast and I enjoyed it deeply.. Coming back to it now feels l8ke meeting an old friend. The only thing I don't remember is how short it is in chapter count, it never felt short thpugh when I reading it. The chapters were packed to the brim and I never felt disappointed in any chapter I was reading.
Having this be my second read will always be blessing in of it self, now knowing what is to come as of 2019-2020.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/27/2020
This was absolutely incredible. Just. Wow. Towards to middle I don’t as thinking it was getting pretty long and stretched, but, all that background was needed to understand, to feel what all the characters did, and for the ending to be what it was. Thank you so much, rift-raft, for finishing this, and for writing such an epic.
Athnay chapter 1 . 10/29/2020
10 years. Congrats! Thank you for an amzing story.
Neo Skies chapter 16 . 7/30/2020
Wow, this was amazing.
PseudoRidge chapter 8 . 7/16/2020
I honestly agree with the other reviewer; Astrid and the others (mainly Astrid) blow the stealing waaaaaay out of proportion
On both occasions, I actually had to stop reading the story for a bit because I lost interest in the constant accusations and “blehhh he act like dragon, he not Hiccup, he traitor bleeehh”
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2020
Put POINTS OF VIEW (POV) on this story so people will know who's view you are talking about .
PikaCuddle chapter 16 . 4/2/2020
Alright. I have to say, I've read this fanfiction years ago and I just read it again. I remembered parts of the story vaguely and it was a blast to read. Really. There's only one thing that stuck to me so much which I remembered from reading it before. Why do they care so much about the goddamn fish Hiccup stole? Yeah he stole alright. Stealing because you are starving however? The story kept and kept going on about this and it annoyed the heck out of me.

All together though I say this is a must read as a HTTYD fan. The hybrid Night Fu- Shadow-Blender excuse me idea was really good and well thought out. The magic breaking when Snotlout said 'Hiccup' and the end where They intervene. It was a blast. I haven't read the next story yet, but I will. Also your video is really good. I recognized everything in there! Have a good one. ;)
athnayy chapter 1 . 3/26/2020
Just had to reread this story again today. Espacially on the 10th anniversary of How to Train Your Dragon! Love your work!
ErelagonPlays chapter 18 . 2/6/2020
This was a great story
Allot of interesting twists and surprises
But it is sad to know that he turned back to be human.
But they will find a way...

This is one of the best httyd stories I have read
Being only out ruled by:
Brothers of Night by toothlessgolfer
But a great story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2020
wow are you sure this description of transformation doesn't falls under M catagory. but for the rest i like it a lot. also maybe you just could put a line in front of the text section saying wich POV's it is.
FriggleBerry chapter 2 . 1/4/2020
Would be nice if it was marked between POV changes kind of annoying when it just swaps no warning whatsoever
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