Kudos to you, i have not found a story like this or should i say a story that has captured my attention and my sense of creativity. I would love an updat because i'm very intrested so till then...

-LunnarChild

a VERY interesting twist. I am so tired of story retellings, Once hiccup downed the nightfury in FRONT of the entire village i knew things would get interesting.

Super awesome chapter! I love how long it was. Really looking forward to the next. :D

Yes if you can't continue please at least tell us what happens. I read too many fanfics that have not been updated in years or discontinued. It's sad coz some of them are really good.

Do you know how hard it is to find a decent adventure fic that isn't predictable, isn't a re-telling of the story, and is actually well written? Thank you SO much for posting this - your creativity is inspiring. And I love Toothless - I don't think he's out of character at all. I think it was being forced to submit to Hiccup's ability to fix his tail in the movie that humbled Toothless enough that it didn't show as much. Inside though, I think he's pretty darn proud to be a big bad dragon, tail or no tail :)

Aww Cliffhanger! I Loved It! Can't wait for the next chapter! Really loved the Hiccup Toothless talking parts! Hope the next chapter doesn't take that long to finish as this one did.

Man, why did I read the whole chapter in one sitting? Now all I wan't more. Great chapter and can't wait for more.

Yay! An update!

Long chapter indeed.

For several moments there, I thought there was something else about Snotlout or something...

I guess maybe I'll see in the coming chapters.

Hope you update again soon. _

And once again, you continue to amaze me!

A few missing words here and there as far as what can be improved, but just minor things that don't detract from the story overall.

The dialogue, though, was superb. Also, the level of detail you put into actions, the environment... simply astounding.

I won't tell you to update soon, though; the amount of work evident in your writing makes the wait between chapters well worth what you deliver.

WOWZERS that was a long chapter! It took me over an hour to read! Im sad you didnt mention me... anyways I have just two words to describe this chapter. HOLY SHAMOLY! So, i liked how Hiccup found a sense of playfulness in Toothless. 30 thousand words... nice job.

Wow, simply an very very VERY great story! The details and ength of Chapter 7 made it the best chapter so far! Very nice work on it and just keep doing what you are doing since you have the skill of writing on a high and easily useable level.

Also, best of luck with the problem whatever it is! I hope things turn out good and it would be a shame if you couldn't finish the story. It is quite an amazing story and you write it simply fantastic. But, if the worse happens, I understand if you can't finish it. SO, best of luck with that and good luck with your new job and good luck in school!

Also, this got 157 reviews already in one day (I think) or the overall story. ALso, thanks so much for the special thanks at the beginning of the story! I really appreciate that and that was quite an honor for me and completely unexpected since I have only a few weeks ago started the story and just barely talked to you on DA or FanFiction.

Finally!

I hope whatever family troubles you have can be solved with minimal conflict, believe me- I know the feeling.

I loved this chap, one of my favorites. I did notive 4 mistakes though. I love how you incorpirate little things like the drawing and the digested fish into the story.

Can't wait for the next chap!

~GGN~

Great chapter! its really good! toothless and hiccups realtionship seems to be getting better, and toothless seems very protective of hiccup! BROTHERLY LOVE!AWESEOME!

good luck with your new job and i hope things work out for you,

i look forward to the future chapters and cant wait till next update!

GD101

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"I'd say that she'd been caught in the ribs and [had] stupidly [decided to] come here [anyways - anyway]"

"...if he wanted to take out as many of them as he could instead of going for Astrid and Snotlout first[,] he'd [make a] beeline right for the poor girl."

" He self-consciously [deflatedwhen - deflated when] the attention" need an extra space there.

", I managed to hold still and gaze calmly into [Snotlout'scerulean - Snotlout's cerulean] eyes, easily noticing the downwards angles of his eyebrows" Again, extra space needed.

"…but to have it pointed out to me and [accusedby - accused by] someone" Again...

Ahh man. Hiatus? Just when it was getting good as well. I liked how you fixed up the whole magic thing, and I've got nothing to point out except for the grammar flops I found while reading through. There might be more, but I've missed them.

Looking forwards to the next chapter, and hopefully the ones after that one.

I hate bad news... that's a stupid statement everyone hates bad news... unless its "your work place has exploded... sorry your fired" when you hated the place... anyway HURRAY for update awesome story and way to go Hiccup remembering to write though I could see this going the way of the movie from here on in... less dragon riding more learning to trust... Toothless dragon-napped to lead to the nest riderless Hiccup saves day... or however the story plays out I am looking forward to the next chapters