I love this story! You really should update more! Can't wait to read what happens next. I loved the symbolism at the end by the way :D

I just wanted to tip my hat to you for this fantastic piece of work. Everything flows and fits together and your way of dealing with the emotions and mentality of the situation is a joy to read. Keep it up.

The drama! It's just so breath taking! You are doing well, my friend. Keep it up. D

this story is one of the best stories that Ive have ever read, please keep it up P

Excellent update, Well worth the wait.

This is a very impressive story. Definitely looking forward to your next chapter!

You did a terrific job on keeping the kids in character. If that was your biggest worry, then I am excited, because that means you are really putting a lot of effort into making this best HTTYD fanfic evar.

P.s. I don't know why exactly, but I laughed hard at the "dear reader" part.

I really enjoyed reading this please post more chapters :)

Awesome chapter! This is really going good

WOW i love this it is AWESOME! i like the whole relationship and i really cant wait to see hiccup try to fly :D

GD101

I love the story so far. This chapter is brilliant. I can't wait to see Hiccup learning to fly; he's probably going to get a few headaches from smashing into trees.

Could you please say whose point of view it is. I got very confused quite a few times.

Darkestfury

I actually liked seeing the kids get to action! I wonder if they'll eventually be able to help.

The scene between Toothless and Hiccup was nice to see. I'm glad they are starting to trust each other. Seeing Toothless worry about Hiccup was sweet too.

I can't wait to see what will happen now!

Love, love, LOVE your story. One of my all time favorites in the How to Train Your Dragon fandom and you only have 4 chapters. Keep up the good work!

AWESOME STORY!

I like the magic elements of it. I first thought this would be another HTTYD story told along the lines of the movie from Toothless's POV, but you have created a very interesting tale.

Keep up the good work.

I love this story. The sadistic, sarcastic and arrogant 'Toothless' is awesome and departs from the 'reptilian puppy with wings' idea.

When you put in a page break, could you say whose point of view it is. It got a little confusing.

Please update soon.

Darkestfury (obviously)