I like the way you have the charters personalites prod toothless and hiccup being inquiry. Also the way you are setting this story is interestedly made.

Awsome, Please continue to write this. D

Please update soon, that's all I can say.

Wicked good start to a fic. Cool, funny, and a great mix of action and character building. Keep up the good work!

So far I'm loving this and look forward to seeing where you run with it.

You warned that the characters may seem out of character. I disagree. Based on the way thing have worked out I feel that they are in character.

I don't really have much to say about your technical writing as it seems well though out and there were very few grammatical errors.

Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of this story soon.

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

Man , this is awesome can't wait for more

ohhh wonder how toothless is going to take that. Can't wait for more!

Thank you so very much for making me cry. Seriously. xDD

Please update the story soon~ It's fantastic~

hahah, love this story

Now that is an update. 23 pages and that’s the average/minimum! Sadistic Toothless is fun to read and I feel all the characters are very in character with the events that have taken place. Hiccup may whine a bit but I guess that is who he is. Can’t wait to read more.

This is really interesting, it's a great idea! I'm HOOKED. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Really, now how how HOW haen't i reviewed this yet? Okay, i'll start now. First off, this story is amazing so far! And even though it's only three chapters long so far, it took me a while to read because the chapters are so LONG! -loves long chapters- What was this chapter again? 23 pages? That's impressive. If i try to write a chapter that long, i'm sure that i'd start repeating myself.

Anywho, now, onto the characters. As far as i can tell, everyone's in character, which is really an accomplishment, especially for the mute characters like Toothless, and even more so in this stage of the story (in terms of where the movie would be if this had happened) and i congradulate you on that. But i have to say, i love love LOVE the Sadistic!Toothless you've written; it's a brand new concept for me and i'm glad that it was this story that introduced it to me. Now, onto Hiccup. He's in character, and saying EXACTLY what i think he would if he were turned into a dragon (i.e. in a sense, that he hated it.) I also love how you had him keep some of his human characteristics, like his hair color (represented in his scales) and his freckles.

Now, please, update soon! I'd love to see what happens next!

-K

23 pages is not as long as you'd like? Well, admittedly, it isn't as long as I would like, but that is because my expectations (hopes?) are completely unreasonable.

When I come across writing this good, I really don't want it to end. In fact, I saw the update almost immediately after you added it (I have had this story constantly open on a tab since I found it), but only just now finished the chapter. This is not because I am slow reader, nothing could be further from the truth. The reason that it took me so long was because I deliberately read it only in small pieces at a time in an effort to make it last longer.

I unfortunately do not have any real criticism for you. I just am not any good at that. All I can really offer instead is my encouragement. Please keep writing, you are quite good at it.

Apologies if my review seems confusing or repetitive. It is 3:00 in the morning here, and I am really not thinking too well.

The shadow bender was attacking the village, stealing their food, killing with out mercy, yet his honor is smeared?

Seems he needs a lession in honor.

If someone attacks them, their evil, yet they initiate the attack and clain their the honorable ones?

While Hiccup was in many ways defending the tribe. Seems he's on the moral high ground, while toothless is crying sour grapes.

Wonder what would happen if the shoe was on the other foot?

Hope Hiccup stands up against him soon, not just plead for returning to Human form.

Great chapter

LFTM (Look forward to more)

Ja ne

Jim