Reviews for All the Wild Horses
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 29 . 11/13/2017
Like I said in my first review, I don't typically read isn't my thing at all but your summary had me curious. I loved your story and it had the right amount of angst, humor, romance, and of course, lemons. The only objection I have is that I feel like we never got to see Bella talk to Edward about Jake or even see her get past it. There was that quick moment outside of Emmett's store but being that he really did a number on her, I guess I expected a bigger moment of her really getting over him. I feel like Edward really went through a lot but not so much Bella. She really kept things in, even until the very last chapter. Edward had known all along about the gossip but she never did feel comfortable talking to him about it - I just wish we could have seen her trust and open up more to Edward before accepting his proposal. Other than that, I really did love this story...even all these years later!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 25 . 11/13/2017
Yes...time to find out Edward! I love that Edward can speak honestly with Charlie. It's so rare that I love every character from a fic but I really love your characters (except Rose...bitch!). Charlie is such the stereotypical cop dad haha...he's hilarious with making Edward admit the cigarettes are his haha. I'm happy Renee is finally talking some sense into Bella...she's needed it for awhile!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 22 . 11/13/2017
Yay for moving in together!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 21 . 11/13/2017
UNF...Edward playing guitar shirtless...yes please! Great chapter...I can't say it enough times but I love this Edward! And I love this Alice too!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 20 . 11/13/2017
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was TOO CUTE! Gah...I love this Edward so much! First ILY's...perfect!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 19 . 11/13/2017
Edward is so damn SEXY *growl*
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 18 . 11/13/2017
Hot! I love this Edward...gah!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 16 . 11/12/2017
So glad Edward has closure time for Bella
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 15 . 11/12/2017
Aaaaaaand she fell again...
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 13 . 11/12/2017
Oh boy...dinner should be interesting haha
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 12 . 11/12/2017
Hmmm don't know if working for someone you're dating is a good idea...we'll see
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 10 . 11/12/2017
Ok...I really am liking this story but #1 why is Bella tripping and falling EVERY chapter? It's getting a tad ridiculous at this point and #2 why the hell is she crying right now?! She wanted this date and it's going well and then boom...tears and breakdown. Doesn't quite make sense to me...
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 9 . 11/12/2017
They are too cute
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 5 . 11/12/2017
Yay...thanks for the EPOV!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 3 . 11/12/2017
Very cute...please tell me there is an EPOV at some point?!
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