|Reviews for Penance|
| doubledamn chapter 15 . 9h
Pride ate Gluttony, right? Did he also gain Gluttony's False Gate?
| doubledamn chapter 9 . 22h
While an interesting conversation, I don't think you thought this one out very well from the Magics side of things. While there has been little to no mention of any sort of religion in Rowling's books, they have definitive proof of Souls existing, Voldemort's Shade for instance, or DEMENTORS that EAT YOUR SOUL. Paintings and Ghosts are described as magically reinforced personalities, not true Souls at all.
| LilinAnade chapter 21 . 6/22
Such an awesome story! I almost cry when Sirius died. I mean, it almost as touching as the real book!
Thanks for sharing this story. It's my number one favorite now! And I can't wait to read the other ending. Thanks again XD
| Jutten chapter 21 . 5/24
This story manages to convey emotions I never thought I could even feel when reading; Definitely one I will never forget, thank you for this amazing adventure
| Axel Fones chapter 13 . 5/4
Well then. Things escalated in a direction I wasn't initially expecting. I was being way too optimistic. Damn, now it seems like Ed has to deal with politics and intrigue to escape. I'm expecting fireworks lol.
| Axel Fones chapter 12 . 5/4
That fucking cat painting. Oh man the Ministry is gonna take their wands and then get completely wrecked. OR at least I hope. Either way it should be interesting.
| Axel Fones chapter 11 . 5/4
Ed's attitude greatly amuses me.
| Axel Fones chapter 10 . 5/4
Damn Ed is having fun throwing waves.
| Axel Fones chapter 7 . 5/4
I love how you have things working out, feels smooth and well paced.
| Axel Fones chapter 6 . 5/4
Damn, Ed is a badass. And oh damn dementors.
| Axel Fones chapter 5 . 5/4
Jesus Christ, that boggart.
| Axel Fones chapter 4 . 5/4
Man it always hurts a little to see Ron written accurately and see how much of a narrow-minded ass he is. Flew over my head a bit when I was younger.
| Axel Fones chapter 3 . 5/4
That was not a well thought out plan lol.
| Axel Fones chapter 2 . 5/4
THis is really interesting, I'm hooked.
| ffoodie Wattpad chapter 21 . 5/1
THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!