Reviews for Penance
Lunawerewolfy chapter 21 . 2/19
i loved it! by far my favourite crossover ever! such dramatic pace n style and it kept faithful to both universes so well. maybe now harry can name his kid after ed or al rather than bloody severus snape, eh?
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 21 . 1/19
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*CRYING*
*CRYING INTERNALLY*
*CRYING EXTERNALLY*
*JUST*
*CRYING*
Ahhhhhh, but poor sirius, oh man, this story, I just, AHHHHHH
I gotta read your alternate ending, and this story is SO favorited, and just, AAHHH, AHHHHHH...

Roy! Everyone else! They got back! They got backkkkkk! Oh, but all the others back in the HP world, ahhhh, but AHHHHHH

I really love how you ended this... I mean, all in all, the HP series will probably go in the same direction, though probably with less bumps in Harry/Ron/Hermione's search because they've experienced more than they did in cannon. And Ed and Al got back... and Dumbles' decision, and, and, anddddd

TOO MUCH
GOTTA GO READ YOUR ALTERNATE ENDING THINGY NOW

AP-C
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 20 . 1/19
NNUUUUOOOHHHHH
SOMETHIN
SOMETHIN GONNA GO DOWN
-!

...
...You are quite good at this thing where you make me shriek internally from terror and suspence...
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 19 . 1/19
D; D; I'M ROLLING AROUND ON THE FLOOR RIGHT NOW... YES, WHILE i'M TRYING TO TYPE... WHYYY... WHY YOU DO THIS TO MEEEE...
(Though I knew not everyone could get out of this all in one piece and stuff) (BUT STILLLLLL)
YOU... YOU MAKING ME FEEEEEEL... WHAT IS THIS FEEL I FEEL...
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 18 . 1/19
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 17 . 1/19
TRAGEDY
YOU KEEP SAYING DAT
BUT WAT
WHY
WAT U MEAN
Dx AHHHH

Oh, man, I can't handle this... shit's gonna go down...!

...I wonder if they'll get back to Amestris?
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 16 . 1/19
AHHHHHSDFMSIORGJFJSDFOCIM
nuuuuuuu... the suspense...
xD
Dx
O.O
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 15 . 1/19
...WHAT'S WITH THE ELEMENTS!? i'M SO CONCERNED... AHHHH
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 14 . 1/19
AHHHHH
YAAASSSSS
...But
what's that bit about fire at the end...? makes me... a... a bit... ... anxious...

...
...xD
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 13 . 1/19
EEEEEEE-
Dammit! Pride! The most awful one! Couldn't greed have, like, kicked gluttony over or something!? Even envy's shape-changing wouldn't have been too hard, since they're used to polyjuice and all... Ahh! Pride's a dick! xD hahaha
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 12 . 1/19
Savvy! xD Knew it couldn't be hoenheim.

But AHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT'D YA DOOOOO WHAT'S HAPPENED!?
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 11 . 1/19
...Uh oh...
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 10 . 1/19
Dangit, malfoy... whatcha gonna doooooo
xD
Neat, they're at hogwarts! I confess, I predicted their houses... it's so sad that they're not in the same one though! But I figured they might get more info from being in different ones? I wonder what'll happennnnnn :P
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 9 . 1/19
...Ahh, souls... but they do believe in them, since they believe dementors can TAKE them, so at least there's that.
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 8 . 1/19
SHITE
PRIDE
ERRRGHHHHH
Knew there was gonna be some sort of twist with him thrown in there... uh ohhhhhhh
Ha, but I kinda hope he kills voldy or something. that'd be funny. xD
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