| Reviews for Penance |
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   techdud227 chapter 21 . 9/7 Kudos Well written, good read. |
| LadyDreamer.12 chapter 11 . 7/16 I really tried to make myself finish this fic, but your Edward is not bad ass. He's just bad. You made him an OP genius that belittle everything that's magic. I really tried to tolerate it, but I realized that it's just better to drop it. Yeah, no. |
| LadyDreamer.12 chapter 11 . 7/16 Edward is a jerk. I remember him being wild or rough, but not a rude asshole like the one in this fic... |
| Backpack Bandit chapter 13 . 10/7/2023 Love how it took very little convincing for Sirius to consider Ed and Al important members of the Order We stan the best father figure in the story tbh |
| maskedkeeper chapter 21 . 8/15/2023 It's must be raining cause I keep feeling water in my eyes |
| AurelionNoir chapter 7 . 6/8/2023 The treatment of Dumbledore here is appalling. While you have Remus pretty much defend his actions, I hoped you could've at least made him defend himself. And also, the Dumbledore I knew wouldn't outright invade their minds - much less to a couple of very irate teenagers. You could've just did what he did to Harry - since he could detect whether someone lies, he just manipulates or guides them to the correct answer he is looking for. At best, this is very fanon. And I hate how Dumbledore is this way as everything was going so well. :( |
| Thomas-The-TMC chapter 21 . 4/22/2023 top stuff |
| VinTEB chapter 10 . 1/16/2023 Everyone laughed, and Ed punched his brother lightly on the arm. It was true that he didn't have his deck. It wasn't as if he was going to challenge the head Homunculus to a poker game. Winner takes all. The fate of the country would depend on whether the Homunculus caught on to the cards hidden up Ed's sleeve… LOL! I would like to see it in a fanmade comic or animation |
| Rei chapter 21 . 7/24/2022 This was the best HPxFMA crossover I read. |
| Jack chapter 5 . 5/1/2022 this soap opera horseshit is so incredibly contrived i think it gave me cancer. |
| Ccoronamontijo chapter 21 . 1/9/2022 Amazing story! Thank you |
| KnellaLuna chapter 21 . 9/12/2021 Very good! Loved the ending, if a little sad! |
| NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 20 . 6/5/2021 I ended up rereading this story and it was just as good as the first time! I remembered little bits of the story but the way you wrote it meant it still kept me absolutely hooked! I love how you write about the emotions of the different characters - Ron's frustration at losing an arm, Ed forcing himself to grin for Draco, the elation when Draco came up with an idea to destroy the stone, Fred and George arguing with their mum to stay at home (wow, when one of them shouted about not leaving her alone because she was their mum, that hit me so incredibly hard) and Ed's desperation to get to Al (Ron's POV added to it wonderfully) There were so many wonderful moments in it and you wrote them all so well - I absolutely loved this! |
| WildFreedom chapter 10 . 4/29/2021 Without a doubt they should both be hufflepuff. |
| BFGGGH chapter 18 . 1/19/2021 pride went-hey, let's kill everyone yeah? |