Reviews for Penance
S.N. Rainsworth chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
You've read my stories a lot - now it's my turn to return the favor.

I like your prologue. :)

Moshe snake chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Great! Forgive me for not writing any more, I do not dominate very well the English, but your story is promising! bye
Harp Strumming Choirboy chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Ack! I wasn't mentioned in the A/N? I AM OFFENDED!

*serious for about two seconds*- HAHAHAHA, JUST KIDDING! I don't care.
N. Silvutra Mayhem chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Ooh~ This is such an interesting start I'm really, really curious to see what happens next :D

Aha, I see you've gone with mangaverse/brotherhood. I think the way you pulled it off was interesting too, but maybe some parts needed more detail? Not detail as in description or anything, but about what happens, maybe. Eh, I don't know what I'm saying anymore, so disregard that.

Actually, the story feels kind of fast (or maybe it's just me and how long I'm used to chapters). It's alright though, because it's not the hey-let's-get-everything-done-in-this-chapter fast (I have read that before - they had a teensy complication and it was solved by the end of the same chapter) it's more along the lines of oh-I-know-what-I'm-writing-and-this-is-my-normal-pace.

...if you get what I mean.

Eh, sorry for not being anymore helpful ;;

The Curse of Forever chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Very excited for more of this :D

Please update soon!
Bletgh chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Update this, now! I'm begging you! I wanna know what'll happen next!
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