|Reviews for With These Two Hands|
| Moonlit Novel chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
Interesting to say the least, but needs more chapters
| 1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
awesome fu is my faveorite jinchuriki shes epic xD
looking forward to your next!
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
LOL Hahahahaha ROFLMAO. Oh kami, that was the last thing I expected. For the love of all that is ramen that was one heck of a twist. I have read fics where Naruto has been adopted by Hiruzen(Sandaime), Asuma, Kakashi, Anko, Kurenai, Genma, Hayate, Yuugao, Ibiki, Inoichi, Hiashi, Shikaku, Choza, Fugaku, Itachi, Rin, Jiraiya, Shizune, Tsunade, and many many more. But I have never seen a single fic, where Gai is Naruto's father. Oh man, I can't wait to see what you have planned. :)
| god of all chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| fractionofzero chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
this is a very good start. aside from a few grammar and spelling mistakes it was great.
| Paul Namikaze chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
good chapter just hope that naruto and fu get a better life esspecially with the new stuff thats happening in the manga
| kareshi13 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
not bad, for a prologue at least. i look forward to reading this. not many people use fu as a character so its always nice to see a new naruxfu story. good luck. _
| I Kicked A Baby chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
so just disregarding canon huh?
| Revan the Wicked chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
add yugito also please
| Cryptic Saiyan chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
this looks awesome, i hope to see more