|Reviews for Bright Star|
| CloudySkye12 chapter 5 . 1/28
Pretty good. Just a note: if vampire Nessie was changed at nine,she would probably still be considered an immortal child. Just a note.
| happy.ala chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
| happy.ala chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
| happy.ala chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Good chapter :-)
| happy.ala chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
Wonderful story. I am surprised it doesn't have hundreds of reviews. I hope it will someday because it's so good. Thank you :-)
| gerryade.merrygold chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
| csp4 chapter 5 . 12/1/2011
Bella now has the strength to beat Edward's ass:::))))
| csp4 chapter 4 . 12/1/2011
"Everything wrong in her life – my absence, her father's demise, her scars – were tangled in the mess that Victoria had created" Hmmmm? Kinda minimizing your fault aren't you, Edward? I think Edward created the mess by leaving:(
It's nice that Bella got her revenge:)
| csp4 chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
"That psychic chick told me you're an all right guy when you're not blaming yourself for every little thing that's wrong with the world." Well, that explains why he's never an all right guy:(
"We are compromising" This said after he states what's going to happen & when! He hasn't changed at all, Bella:( He won't until he's forced to!
Considering everything that's happened, the time that's passed, a world of werewolves & vampires, this 'waiting until marriage' thing is beyond weird! Edward in control mode again - & Bella allowing it! Considering Edward's personality - whiner, coward, idiot, controller - I'd demand to sample the goods before I committed to marriage with him:)
| csp4 chapter 2 . 12/1/2011
"...and angry that I hadn't been able to keep myself away from her sweet life" I'm finding Edward pathetic:( He thinks Bella's had a 'sweet life' even tho she said Victoria has been trying to kill ever since they left:(
"A day, if we leave soon" then "For the past week, I had begged, pleaded and threatened in regards to Bella coming here" I guess Bella didn't leave soon:::))
"Bella was consorting with a werewolf?" Seems that Edward is stupid as well as being an idiot coward:( When Bella asked if it was OK if she brought some 'people' with her, did they think she was bringing humans to help? LOL LOL
"I had held and loved so dearly" Loved so dearly? If what he did was love Bella dearly, I'd chose to be hated!
I can honestly see a 17 year old girl falling in love with Edward & his pathetic personality, but after 5 years of going thru what she has, Prettyboyward wouldn't stand a chance in hell if it was me - he's no different than he was...pathetic:(
| csp4 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Even tho I'm pleased that Bella never got together with Jake, that doesn't mean I don't want Edward & the Cullen's to be punished for being idiot assholes:( If they immediately start calling family, I'm going to scream!
"I secretly suspected Jacob thought of the nine year old as something else" Jake imprinted on her? Ewwwww! It would be a totally different thing if she was a 9 year old human, but as a vamp she will never age:( If he did, I feel so sorry for him!
| oopsadaysey chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
Only found this story about a half hour ago. Short, sweet and maybe a little rushed. I am surprised with the lack of reviews however.
Good tight story line in places but rushed in others.
| OhThoseGoldenEyes chapter 5 . 2/12/2011
Hmm, short and sweet.
| OhThoseGoldenEyes chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
Yeah..I still LOVE the style...but I felt like everything in this chapter was extremely rushed.
Everything just happened way to fast like..they went from forgiving to loving to changing to marrying in a matter of 10 minutes...idk, just my thought
| OhThoseGoldenEyes chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
I see that it's a short story, but how does it only have 37 reviews?