|Reviews for The Illusion of Freedom|
| Hannah chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Wow! Just, wow! I've read all your Hunger Games stories. I I love Love is a Battlefield so much! Half way through, I was wanting Katniss dead. But all your stories are so amazing! I love what you do, taking people like Cato, Clove, Cashmere and Enobaria, who we think of as villains, and making them into real human beings, who are just so broken inside. More broken than Katniss probably was. It really brings home that
message that no one is born a bad person, no-one can murder and destroy without suffering themselves. And that no-one ever really wins the Hunger that! Great job! I hope I turn out to be as great a writer as you.
| braders101 chapter 23 . 9/22/2013
Just finished reading both stories about Cashmere. And you're a fantastic writer.
I have always had something with cashmere, always curious about her, and you have really brought out her character to me.
Thank you for keeping me amused. I will now be reading many of your other fictions.
:) I feel blessed.
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/9/2013
| Mads515 chapter 21 . 12/8/2012
This is amazing! I love gloss as a character and cashmere too:) there should be more cashmere and gloss fanfics out there!
| IloveFinnickOdairHG chapter 21 . 10/30/2012
Ursala reminds me of friends
| Anla'shok chapter 23 . 10/10/2012
Knew it... I liked that old lady! *sniffs*
At least Falco and Narissa are still alive.
A great story both for the characters, the action and the political aspect. I'll eventually read the sequel when it'll be wise for me to take an evening off to read
| Anla'shok chapter 22 . 10/10/2012
The Narissa/Cashmere interaction was hysterical.
Of course Satin would marry Miracle. *huffs*
the rebellion is doomed unless they stay underground another decade or so (or you make this AU), it sort of kills the joy of seeing them all plot. But the plotting is still fun.
| Anla'shok chapter 20 . 10/10/2012
Kick ass old woman is the M of Capitol's secret services? (well, rebel recruitment agency, but it's the same thing. Cool! Come on Cashmere, kill Miracle, it's not like Snow's going to give you hell for it.
| Anla'shok chapter 19 . 10/10/2012
I have this thing for abrasive characters as long as they don't go overboard in the unpleasant. Satin is fun.
| Anla'shok chapter 18 . 10/10/2012
Wow this chapter was almost cheerful. So a rebellion is building up, what fun
| Anla'shok chapter 16 . 10/10/2012
phew, Gloss won!
I really like your Mags. I also love all the filler, it's what makes stories interesting.
| Anla'shok chapter 15 . 10/10/2012
I laughed at the way you portrayed Mags. Good call
This chapter struck me as more intense and less depressing, maybe I'm just getting used to it...
Reading on. I'm curious about when Narissa will appear again. It doesn't seem the kind of OC you introduced just for the heck of it.
| Anla'shok chapter 13 . 10/10/2012
*takes a deep breath* You gave me a scare with those last paragraphs lol, even if I know Gloss will win.
This still is depressing, seriously, every character is in pain at some stage. Why am I even reading this?
But it's well written so I'll continue depressing myself. I like the fact that you keep every character's personality well defined even after so many chapters. I've seen many fics with strong characters end up with a heap of generic OCs with no substance.
| Anla'shok chapter 10 . 10/10/2012
Random comment: what's with the nickname Cash? Seriously it sounds cheap. But aside from that, interesting and nicely written as always. I really love Falco and the new OCs always have an entertaining story to tell.
| Anla'shok chapter 8 . 10/10/2012
Gloss is an idiot. A selfish idiot behind his airs of nobility. But since he's going to win I won't bash him up any longer.