|Reviews for The Demon Within|
| YummySparklys chapter 6 . 9/19/2014
I DON'T CARE IF THIS WAS UPDATED FROM 2011 I STILL LOVE IT.
| Necrolily chapter 6 . 7/28/2012
Oh lord this is wonderful!
Did you ever have any plans on continuing this?
| Sev.Nights chapter 6 . 4/17/2012
Great work -please go on!
I enjoyed it so far; the world really needs more evil!Engie
I've barely seen any good-written stories of that kind and to find your story here made my day :)
Also liked your allusion to Samuel Brook's TF2: the Trouble with Time travel, it's one of my favorites here (a shame the updates stopped a while ago)
Anyways, I hope you'll try and continue this work here. It would be great.
| Chessolin chapter 5 . 2/1/2011
Your story scares me, in a good way. I like the idea of them almost being clones too. You do a great job with detail; not too much that it's boring, but enough that you understand fully what's going on and can visualize it.