Reviews for Stregoni Benefici
acacia59601 chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Excellent chapter, as always! I can't wait to see what else you give me!
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
I liked the way you described the movement of the venom through the body. It gave a sharp mental picture to me.

Dorothy! :-(
NotTooOldForThis chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Just lovely!
ShouldBeRetiringForTheNight chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
This is without doubt the most sophisticated and compelling imagining of the SM vampire world that I have encountered. The interweaving of the various layers of the story is masterful and I feel so much for Carlisle - his every thought and action is believable and heartrending. Absolutely wonderful. Thank you!
Openhome chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Dear God, woman, I love you!
k1942 chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
That was the most moving, touching description of Edward's change I've ever read. Carlisle is such a good soul, it makes you want happiness for him, and that is what Edward represented to him. A companion, a friend, a son, all these things has he created for himself, and I can't find it in me to condemn him for it.
Goldeneyes'1640 chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
OMG! Your writing never ceases to amaze me... This chapter... Once again, fantastic! I love it! It is so perfect- exactly as I imagined it happening! This will always be one of my favourite fanfictions. 3 honestly, these words do not even begin to describe how much I loved this chapter and indeed the whole fic... Just... Bravo!
From Goldeneyes'1640 xxx
Beans827 chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Ahhh, so so good. I really love the relationship between Carlisle and Edward. Granted, I can understand why Edward resents this new life but I have always loved how Carlisle really just tried to do his best and keep his word to Elizabeth. Great job! Thanks for the update.
thepinktabby chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Wow! I loved it. I like the fact that the name was as important as it was in the last chapter. William had spent Carlisle entire life time trying to mold him in his own image and failed. Now that Carlisle has a son the name once again becomes important but only in that it is creating a family, a bond that he didnt have. Its sweet how worried and indecisive he was a far cry from the patriarch of Breaking Dawn. Yet you can see the beginnings of maturity, like a new father he is learning to see all sides and is now focusing on how it will affect Edward. I like that Carlisle seemed a little panicked, telepath, haha. New fathers are adorable. Lol I adored how you've described Edwards paragliding 'bottle green' eyes, its new and different and i totally pictured a seven up bottle. Thanks for the update it was brilliant! I loved it.
fuzzyltlwingedthing chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Wow, I've been waiting for this one!

I can't remember if I asked this before, but why did you choose to have Carlisle meet Edward's dad? I don't remember anyone (well SM) mentioning this or even Edward saying he had seen Carlisle's memories of him. In fact he's mentioned so little I figured he had no memory of him, even vicariously through Carlisle.

On the other hand, I don't know the guidebook as well as I do the books :-)
Guest chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
Oh, I would hug them both.
Noble Korhedron chapter 26 . 12/13/2012
Please post those remaining bits ASAP! I GOTTA see the rest! :-D chapter 26 . 12/9/2012
Aaah ... this is EXACTLY how it happened! You need to help Stephanie write the next book. Past and future - perfect for you!
miaokuancha chapter 26 . 12/9/2012
omg i love your version of how carlisle comes to be on the raids! so much better and more plausible than canon. this chapter is a tour de force from start to finish! all the riffs on burning and transformation. holy crow!
CayStar chapter 26 . 12/9/2012
Oh, poor Carlisle :(
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