Reviews for Hogyoku ex Machina |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was a fun read...a puppy, he turned a powerful object into a puppy...of course he did |
![]() ![]() ![]() He made it a puppy. Of course he made it a puppy. Why wouldn't he make other arrangements puppy. I mean, this fic is amazing and I definitely had more comments to make about Ichigo and how awesome you related him to the various powers he has, but the puppy thing seems to have removed all that |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have attempted to read this twice so far, and both times I stopped here. 5k favorites... smh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I went into a cuteness frenzy when I saw what you did with perhaps the most dangerous object in Bleach. |
![]() ![]() Awww, that last line gets me every time! This story is a treasure to reread! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still one of the best fanfics written on the site. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I immediately suspected that "Aizen" was actually Ichigo, I was more sure with every death that occurred and was completely certain when Yamamoto activated his bankai and "Ichigo" was struggling to move while "Aizen" was merely working a little bit harder to breath. Aizen said himself that he had already reach the upper limit of what he was capable of, and had not time to do the only thing that would have increased his power, IE fusing with the Hogyoku. Ichigo, at this point, was in his trancedental form still, and was therefore the only one that would have no trouble with that much spiritual pressure. There's also the fact that default Aizen would never be capable of standing up to Yamamoto's bankai, much less matching it with sword swings. |
![]() ![]() J: when the lava dragon was cut in half |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has nothing to do with the story but the HeM_HeM just looks like laughter to me and it makes me happy because I just imagine aizen is just saying hem hem hem in between scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really impressed by this story. It was a fun ride and it followed a natural rhythm sorely lacking in a lot of the stories I enjoy. Well paced with a reasonable conclusion. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() Wow, this is super awesome! Also, my final thought upon finishing this: "of course its a fucking dog." I'm laughing with tears down my cheeks. Anyway, I really loved this! I think I might have started this once upon a time, but never read through it - I cant remember why, and can only say that my past!self missed out on a lot. The story was amazing, the characterization spot on, all the little details simply captivating... I'm not exaggerating by saying that this is probably the best fic I've read all year. I love time travel stories, and imo there's too few of them. When you combine that with your skill in writing and your brilliant ideas, well. There's no way the end result wouldn't be stunning. I loved what you did with Muramasa (I've seen it in a couple of fics, but never with the same kind of thought about the consequences etc of it all). He's so cool. Also, the part about Ichigo realizing Karin might have liked Hitsugaya is pure gold (I laughed so hard at "He dies") - nevermind everyone else's reactions to it. Seriously, this is such a brilliant fic. Thank you ever so much for writing and publishing it! This is the best entertainment I've had in ages. |
![]() ![]() 0-0 Woah... Well... Ichigos screwed. Anyway, Nice writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great story! I especially loved all the zanpakto-hollow related bits (and, ofc, you Ichigo is written magnificently). Muramasa is unexpectedly wonderful character :D And I heartily approve all this flirting with Nel! (I think, she's my choice for het otp with Ichigo). I like this trope of characters learning something shocking/unexpected (and about themselves, too) - here it was in abundance. Huge advantage of this story is also its... compliteness, lol. Nice pacing and plot! I am very interested in reading more ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hogyoku-puppy. BRILLIANT |