Reviews for Dawn
Michelle Law chapter 14 . 2/23
Really different! I'd love to know what caused the "hybrid-ism". I bet Carlisle has TONS of ideas! I like that Bella would have gotten sick and died ANYWAY, rather than a car wreck or someone attacking her. thanks for this.
radix chapter 14 . 4/18/2016
Wow ... amazing story
GaijinVamp chapter 13 . 6/9/2015
I love your writing. I like the changes you made to Bella's personality. I like that Edward is more loving towards Jasper. They're all nicer, except for Rse, of course. This would have been great continued.
Calyptra chapter 6 . 12/20/2014
I'm glad that your Bella needed time. it's more realistic.
and I enjoyed the sslap
Calyptra chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
Oh I like bella. I didn't like the sm version either
lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 14 . 12/4/2014
Don't stop please. U need to know what happens next
Hikada chapter 14 . 5/28/2014
great story can wait to read more
SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
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GaijinVamp chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
What a great story. You have the characterizations and the changes perfect. I love Bella's kick ass personality.
I wish Jasper would be less tentative, but you did a good job with him. I wish you had finished this. Now, more than 2 years later, it's beyond hope.
Monica chapter 14 . 11/6/2013
Very good, so far! Hope you get to write more
zaliyak chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
aww this is the end isnt it well if it is could there at least be a sequel!
Sh-anny99 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Love it
Tee Hill chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
great chapter :))))))))))))))))
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HeatherMarie29 chapter 14 . 3/9/2013
More please
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