Reviews for Torture Makes the Heart Race
FabPezBerry78 chapter 3 . 10/26/2013
so cute :)
FabPezBerry78 chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
great job :)
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
wonderful chapter :)
Sonicthehedgewolf chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
Is this it? Or is it just unfinished
Smayz chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
Oo, this is getting so good. I hope you decide to update soon. I love your writing style.
Smayz chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Wow, you can definitely write a good torture scene. I love the way you described Bella's strength, even when she's at her weakest.
Aidis chapter 3 . 4/25/2011
Hopefully you figure out where you wanna go with this soon cause I'm eager as hell to see what happens next!

-Aidis
chaseherchiss chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
Ummm...you can't just leave it there!

(whiney whimpery noise)

Pretty please...more!

Chase
Bela23 chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
"...the only thing she wanted to do was make sure the rest of the world knew Alice belonged to her and no one else."... LOVE IT... Wonderful chapter... hope you update soon.. Tks
minako366 chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
Yay! Wakey wakey.
HappyLittleVegemites chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
Awesome chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update :)
caradens chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
excellent eagerly awaiting more brilliant updates thanks
Fridizh chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
Interesting.. can't wait to see what happens next.

I wonder what Alice was feeling towards Edward if both of them saw Bella as her mate, and he still pursued her? Well, good job.
minako366 chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
Poor Alice and a giant butt :)
caradens chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
what a Interesting brilliant story

thanks eagerly awaiting more
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