|Reviews for Old Man River|
| Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I AM SO SORRY THIS IS ALMOST A MONTH LATE.
I UNDERSTAND IF YOU HATE ME!
I DON'T HAVE A LOT OF TIME RIGHT NOW, BUT BABY THIS WAS AMAZZZZINNNGGGG.
AND IGNORE THE FLAME YOU GOT.
THE DIALOGUE IS AMAZING.
Of course they watch Twilight.
How is the sex between you and Adam now that he is old? He practically has one foot in the grave!
I loved this! It was great!
Again, I'm sorry this is so late!
| Aphid chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I think you really need to work on your writing skills. This has way too much dialogue in it and not enough description. It's too hard to read that way for most people.
| CrystalxShip chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EDGERRR
DID YOU HAVE TO REMIND HIM THAT YOU WERE HIS GIRLFRIEND BECAUSE HE WAS OOOOLD?
ITS SO WEIRD TO THINK THAT EDGE IS ALMOST FORTY WHORTY
YELLOW IS MY FAVORITE COLOR LET ME DRIVE...even though I don't have a license
you wouldnt even have to bang adam. just dig a hole and he'd fuck the earth. ew.
EW JAY AND EDGE WOULD WATCH TWILIGHT. 26 year anniversary
EDGE IS SO EDGE DAMN ABUSIVE
OMG WE'RE ALL GOING AFTER SILVER FOXES
AHHH I MISS JERICHO
AHAHAHAHA THAT WAS BRILLIANT
now i gotta work on mine. no idea what its gonna be