Reviews for Old Man River
Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
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I AM SO SORRY THIS IS ALMOST A MONTH LATE.

I UNDERSTAND IF YOU HATE ME!

I DON'T HAVE A LOT OF TIME RIGHT NOW, BUT BABY THIS WAS AMAZZZZINNNGGGG.

AND IGNORE THE FLAME YOU GOT.

THE DIALOGUE IS AMAZING.

Of course they watch Twilight.

How is the sex between you and Adam now that he is old? He practically has one foot in the grave!

I loved this! It was great!

Again, I'm sorry this is so late!
Aphid chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I think you really need to work on your writing skills. This has way too much dialogue in it and not enough description. It's too hard to read that way for most people.
CrystalxShip chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EDGERRR

DID YOU HAVE TO REMIND HIM THAT YOU WERE HIS GIRLFRIEND BECAUSE HE WAS OOOOLD?

ITS SO WEIRD TO THINK THAT EDGE IS ALMOST FORTY WHORTY

YELLOW IS MY FAVORITE COLOR LET ME DRIVE...even though I don't have a license

you wouldnt even have to bang adam. just dig a hole and he'd fuck the earth. ew.

EW JAY AND EDGE WOULD WATCH TWILIGHT. 26 year anniversary

EDGE IS SO EDGE DAMN ABUSIVE

OMG WE'RE ALL GOING AFTER SILVER FOXES

AHHH I MISS JERICHO

AHAHAHAHA THAT WAS BRILLIANT

now i gotta work on mine. no idea what its gonna be