|Reviews for Did I ever want to grow up?|
| 5th Dimension chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
What the heck. Why did I have this saved deep in my favorites folders? This story isn't good. The characters don't sound like themselves, the narration's shipping lens is so awkward I nearly puked, the way actions are described is barely adequate, characters are reduced to caricatures, vocabulary is extremely limited, the tone is all over the place even within a single sentence, and a random OC with a really bizarre name is introduced as having an unknown history with Yellow from nowhere just so that you could have a villain.
I'm not reading anymore.
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/18/2014
And then Red turns into a werewolf...WAIT WAHT!? Well if ToxinWing gets to be a vampyre then Red can be a werewolf! :-) :-) :-)
| YOOOOOO chapter 7 . 12/8/2013
WHO THE HELL CHRIS WHAT DID I MISS FROM THE LAST CHAPTER? I SKIPPED THE BOLD WORDS LAST CHAPTER
| 5th Dimension chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
As a general rule of thumb, inserting side notes into the middle of the story is a bad idea as it disrupts the flow.
"(the girl, since most people complain how they thought Green was the guy)" -Same with this. Beginning or end, not middle...
Nonetheless, I think it's interesting.
| andrew chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
um in frlg blue is not the female character its leaf and first of all blue is gary and secondly green likes gold and has purple hair
| yellowfreak32 chapter 13 . 1/15/2013
ha ! green is the son of aphridite SO beautiful!lol i think blue as hermes daugter fits her charactor though
| yellowfreak32 chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
this chap was soo funny, except for the sad part... i was talking about the OJ being oranberry juice instead of orangejuice i cracked up and at the part about the brand of sparkling cider
| MonsterWaterWolf5 chapter 14 . 8/3/2012
I love it!
| Professor Pajamas chapter 14 . 1/9/2012
Great Specialshipping story! Kinda disturbed with the whole blood thing. *shudders*
| tigrun chapter 8 . 7/3/2011
love it but you spell monsieur wrong just to say since i am french
| Anonomys chapter 14 . 6/26/2011
I like the sequel of the beach resot
| Forever-Forgotten22 chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
"I am not a pervert I am not a pervert!"
This part made me laugh so much.
| XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 14 . 6/18/2011
| XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 12 . 6/18/2011
| XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 11 . 6/17/2011
oohh so fluffy! mm..mmm... yeeaaahh...* turns around on a cloud bed* fluffffffyyyyyyy...