Reviews for Did I ever want to grow up?
5th Dimension chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
What the heck. Why did I have this saved deep in my favorites folders? This story isn't good. The characters don't sound like themselves, the narration's shipping lens is so awkward I nearly puked, the way actions are described is barely adequate, characters are reduced to caricatures, vocabulary is extremely limited, the tone is all over the place even within a single sentence, and a random OC with a really bizarre name is introduced as having an unknown history with Yellow from nowhere just so that you could have a villain.

I'm not reading anymore.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/18/2014
And then Red turns into a werewolf...WAIT WAHT!? Well if ToxinWing gets to be a vampyre then Red can be a werewolf! :-) :-) :-)
YOOOOOO chapter 7 . 12/8/2013
5th Dimension chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
As a general rule of thumb, inserting side notes into the middle of the story is a bad idea as it disrupts the flow.

"(the girl, since most people complain how they thought Green was the guy)" -Same with this. Beginning or end, not middle...

Nonetheless, I think it's interesting.
andrew chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
um in frlg blue is not the female character its leaf and first of all blue is gary and secondly green likes gold and has purple hair
yellowfreak32 chapter 13 . 1/15/2013
ha ! green is the son of aphridite SO beautiful!lol i think blue as hermes daugter fits her charactor though
yellowfreak32 chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
this chap was soo funny, except for the sad part... i was talking about the OJ being oranberry juice instead of orangejuice i cracked up and at the part about the brand of sparkling cider
MonsterWaterWolf5 chapter 14 . 8/3/2012
I love it!
Professor Pajamas chapter 14 . 1/9/2012
Great Specialshipping story! Kinda disturbed with the whole blood thing. *shudders*
tigrun chapter 8 . 7/3/2011
love it but you spell monsieur wrong just to say since i am french
Anonomys chapter 14 . 6/26/2011
I like the sequel of the beach resot
Forever-Forgotten22 chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
"I am not a pervert I am not a pervert!"

This part made me laugh so much.
XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 14 . 6/18/2011
XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 12 . 6/18/2011
XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 11 . 6/17/2011
oohh so fluffy! mm..mmm... yeeaaahh...* turns around on a cloud bed* fluffffffyyyyyyy...
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