Reviews for Order of Realisation
May a Chance chapter 6 . 10/25/2014
Sirius Black, nothing serious about it.

Hear: perceive with the ear the sound made by someone or something.

Here: in, at, or to this place or position.
May a Chance chapter 2 . 10/25/2014
Please, shorten the paragraphs. At this length, I can't read it.
nemesisswan chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
There is this thing called ENTER, you know. It would make a chapter much easier to read. Besides, the plot is not interesting. You don't know how to write this scene.
KatzeIason69 chapter 22 . 11/19/2013
hey you know your story is great brilliant even. you shouldn't really linten to other's that much. I mean your the one writing it for your own enjoyment and if other's don't like it oh well is all you have to say but you shouldn't give up on your story(s) either. just keep doing your thing and that's all that matters really.
Sweet17 chapter 22 . 6/5/2013
Wow those guys are mean..
I agree that there are some clich├ęs in the story, but it's not ok to blame someone for this. That's at least my opinion.
I just finished reading the story and I actually don't think it was written badly.
The new chapters with the "new story" are good too.
About those anons:
In case you didn't know, Anonymous is not an username. When you don't have an account in or you want to stay -well- anonymous, you can write a review as "Anonymous".
Unfortunately, more often than not, the anonymous function is abused to send hate messages like you got..
I think you're right for not believing them, because they are just petty. If they didn't like the story, they should rather send constructive critic and if they don't want to do that, they just shouldn't read it.
If you decide to continue the story, I will read it.
Greetings and a hug for you
PS: If there are grammar or writing mistakes in my review, excuse them please, I'm German and I'm still learning.
Yahav Rasberry Juice chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Your painting is frighteningly looks like me only without the freckles ... scary!
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
1sunfun chapter 19 . 10/27/2012
sagotan chapter 22 . 10/20/2012
I thought about calling myself anonymus but wasn't sure if you would find it as humourus as me... had a good laugh at your last non-chapter though...:-P deathtreats really? some people are so stupid it almost hurts... but what ever... I like your story a litte to dark for me but good non the less I just hate seeing harry suffering so much it's hard to read to be honest... hmm so yeah thought you would like some positive rewiev after so much bullshit... I mean my english is bad I know that but come on WTF
yours fathfully Sagotan ;-)
dragonavis chapter 22 . 9/30/2012
Don't listen to the mean reviewers you're writing is fantastic!
Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 22 . 9/6/2012
i think that all those anonymouses are morons, dont listen to them- i think this story rocks.
SereneMayhem chapter 22 . 7/25/2012
Wow. 'Anonymous' is horrible! Death threats? Family being raped? This person is such an idiot. Don't listen to them/him/her, your story is great! Looking forward to an update! :) hope 'anonymous' isn't getting you down! .
evilwing2004 chapter 22 . 7/18/2012
I liked the was very intriguing and I think you wrote Voldemort very well. I have a story on here under this name is it is called Dental Scheme and I would really like your opinion this. Your story was very well done.
Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 chapter 20 . 7/13/2012
Well I liked the story and look foward to what changes happen. You know, you shouldn't feel too badly when some supposedly brilliant written works not only have an OOC Harry (yours was remarkably on base, given a change because of long term torture and pyschological warfare) and rename him. A lot of these 'flamers' will then praise them up and down.

And Dumbledore, if anyone with half a brain had read the final book would realize was manipulative. What would have happened had Voldemort not used Harry's blood to ressurect? He could have told Harry about his plan to die but didn't, because were he and Snape to be on the same page without Dumbledore. He had the best of intentions but he by no means was ever a Gandalf. These idiots need to re-read the series.
The Potters of the Future chapter 22 . 7/7/2012
They are awful things to say. Don't listen to them. Your story is good. Hope this hasn't put you off.
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