|Reviews for Disarm by domysticated|
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Oh my gosh. You did two entries and this one is just as wonderful! More, please!
| EMCxo chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
I was actually rooting for Rose in this story. That's a first!
| DarkBlueBella chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I love your beautiful observations of other people and Edward's interaction with Rose. Really well done.
| HoochieMomma chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
"I take in his formal attire- a tuxedo that's slightly too big for his lean frame, his unruly hair slicked back, polished shoes that must be so uncomfortable- and I long to loosen his tie, to ruffle his hair, to walk barefoot with him in the grass."
With these words, you have slain me!
I loved this. I love the way you have made the pairing seem so natural by highlighting their similarities. Fabulous. Well done and good luck in the contest!
| a big fan chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
this was so lovely. Your words perfectly capture what it feels like, that intense, instant attraction and why rose and edward were so perfect for each other. I swear my stomach flipped a couple of times! While I wish we had seen a little more of bella & rosalie's relationship in the beginning, i really like the sparsity of the writing and the narrative voice.
Good luck in the contest!
| naelany chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
so very sweet :-)
| evilgiraffe82 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Oh, so lovely. Kissing in the library? Fantastic stuff. Best of luck!