|Reviews for Second Chances|
| mm chapter 9 . 2/14
Gaaaah I must have more!
| Starkaster chapter 3 . 2/11
The vast majority of the characterization in this story just baffles me. Melodrama is fine so long as motivations are clear and reactions are proportionate to the situation. I'm not seeing that here. It just feels like melodrama for the sake of melodrama.
Thanks for posting.
| manga pi chapter 5 . 2/10
You're doing a pretty good job with this, fic hope you keep working at it, I especially like how you started the fic most people start a story from the initial conflict, but you started somewhere in the middle, leaving us the reader with a lot of anticipation regarding the mysteries.
It's also different how the world they are in isn't cleary defined from the onset which isn't necessarily bad, I find it interesting that even though I know the series this fic is showing me unexpected aspects of their world. Hopefully that was intended, I'm still a little confused on if konoha is a school or the city itself.
But I'm enjoying what I'm reading and am really anxious to see how it unfolds.
| Addiction's Curse chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
Emotional roller coaster much? My heads still spinning from all the ups and downs. It was awesome.
| paracuties chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
WHAT. NONONONONO. Jeez, this is a completely different type of story from "Brothers," but it still has that closeness between them-which I love. And I like Sakura in here better, for some reason. AND IT IS AWESOME HOW YOU'RE FINALLY REVEALING THE ENTIRE BACKGROUND STORY AND EVERYTHING. The whole time I was reading it, I was wondering, and wondering, what exactly was going on with Naruto's life.
This story is so so so unique. But it's super awesome that way, and written amazingly as well. Interesting how you put them as hockey players. :D
Anyway, glad that the pairings are the ones I like (KakashixRin, orig. I thought you had. RinxObito, and I was like NOOO; SakuraxSasuke, which it seems a lot of people don't support, :/ ; and although I don't think this is the greatest, NaruHina, which doesn't seem to actually be going on anymore...? I'm glad, and this sounds so...terrible of me, but I'm glad she's not having Naruto's kid.)
You're probably wondering why I'm giving you all these opinions. I'm giving you feedback showing how I like how your story is going. ...Nah, I just like to blabber random stuff.
Keep writing, your stories are amazing!
| The Royal Queen Akito chapter 9 . 9/22/2013
Ohhh man, this story is an amazing AU, to say the least. Hmm... I have nothing really bad to say, it is just plain amazing, though have you heard the song The Grey but Icon for Hire? It reminds me a lot of this story and I just wanted to let you know.
| Elspeth chapter 9 . 8/14/2013
I can picture all too well little Naruto in the hands of his kidnapper. Brutal. This is an excellently written story. It's amazing how well the Naruto characters fit in their new setting. More please...
| cherryblossomszahime chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
Aww naruto:( good job with this update it was really good :)
| Clarilyn chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
This was unexpectedly, mind-bogglingly awesome. And I knew the child could never be Naruto's. :P Update soon!
| calypso tchaka chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
thank you for this chapter! I hope you are doing great :) Been a while since I've last read this story, but I enjoy reading it just the same.
Hope you enjoy the rest of your week. :)
| gabstergirl chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
i thought this story had been abandoned lol. update asap!
| Vero-Enelya chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
Finally! I love your story congratulations!
| catzrool chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Beautiful. Intense. Totally worth the wait. More, please!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Cudn't stop myself long enough 2 review. Had 2 finish 1st. Hope u've got more chapters dan dese ready 4 me.
| maxridelover chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
this is great!