I’m about as pissed as the protag at the shit that you’ve written up.. like srsly, the further into the chapter, the more forced does the plot become.. you’re approaching the level of shitstorm here..

and the shitshow continues.. like srsly, with his satellite, nanobots clouds and whatever else spy network he couldn’t notice them approach? And with his fucking teleport tech he can’t react in time.. srsly the protag just deserves to die a painful death.

Omfg.. srsly, this chapter was biggest shitshow you’ve written up so far.

Like holy shit, the dude dude has an AI and supersonic speed but can’t dodge an attack from a fucking snake and an alligator.. he might as well just lay down and die.

God fucking damn it.. Just forget about the shitty scoobies or whatever.. he is a teenager, they tend to easily get influenced by their surroundings.. just move on ffs.. and even if want to be an angsty bitch, then why is he remembering Willow? Last time he was with them, he was all over Buffy.

The author definitely went full retarded while writing this crap chapter :/

So why the fuck is he even so flustered? Who the fuck cares about some old wacko or his daughter..

so he went out of his way to protect himself from magic but forgot psychics? So much for a genius.

I understand that u wanted an epic fight and all, but the struggle was forced as fuck.

Yes he is dead. Mwahahahahaha Mwahahahaha. Thannnnnnnnkkkkkk Yyyyyuoooouuuuu! I am so happy you got to this point in the story before going on Hiatus. Ding ding the clown is dead.

I am eagerly awaiting the death of the Jocker by rodent. bwahahahahaha

Thank you for all the work you put into this story. I don't review nearly enough.

As you started to describe the fur covered monstrosity I was inwardly chanting "come on furbie, furbie, furbie, fuebie" My children were very confused at my exclamation of YES!

You are an amazing writer.

Have fun raiding the castle...I mean hell. Gurrr those Amazons.