Reviews for A Spark of Genius |
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![]() ![]() Find a way to bring Galatea into Xander's life. Maybe after Supergirl shows up. Also remember "Haters gonna hate" and they just insignificant untalented wannabes. Keep up the good work playa! |
![]() ![]() ![]() por favor, continua con la historia. es realmente buen |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I regularly enjoy your writing, I felt this chapter was incredibly - indeed unnecessarily - over dramatic. You have tended to be relatively realistic. Xander getting his butt kicked by Dracula until his upgrades kicked in was really well done. This chapter just took a dump on your standards. Pretty much every problem could have been solved with Xander's portal tech. The artillery, the helicopter, all of it. You didn't even come up with a plot device to temporarily disable portals. Not a single threat should have ever crossed the border. I really hope the character development is spectacular. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love returning to this story periodically, and I do so wish you would to. One of my favorite crossovers on |
![]() ![]() An end can be near... Chapter 46: Thangarians, the new dodos, Xander xtermiates the bird brains. Chapter 47: Wedding and Epilogue, really just a teaser for the rest of the series. You're so close to an ending point, please update. Thanks for writing and sharing, I'm a depressive and you made me laugh! :) |
![]() ![]() Dr. Fate needs to be sent to HELL! The DEMONS are too CHAOTIC! Just coat the helmet in Nth metal... Sensory deprivation ... Can a lord of order go crazy? |
![]() ![]() ORDER?! It is another name for OPPRESSIVE TYRANNY! Order and Chaos are like day and night, both are needed. Xander needs to SLAM the magic fools HARD! And I'm not sure Talia can be redeemed, Ra's is a murderer who needs to die. Assassinate the assassins! |
![]() ![]() CATFIGHT! In other stories Xander is paired with Diana, I like your Artemis too! The Amazons are sadly out of date with the modern world. Reduced to comic relief, how sad... |
![]() ![]() Yes turning Cancer into a killing machine would be bad... Also unfunny! However in a sick city like Gotham, sometimes the cancer cell cannot be cured and need to die for the rest to live. Resolution Its the new code, The endless recycling of evil idiots is boring... |
![]() ![]() Doomsday vs demons! A truly inspired use of one of DC Comics mistakes! I found out the reason behind the death of Superman was copyright law. DC "killed" Clark, waited a few months, then took out a NEW COPYRIGHT. There should be a RULE against all powerful, unkillable, creatures in comics. I blame Lazy Writers. Reusing villains over and over and over again gets boring... |
![]() ![]() Catfight in the future? Selina vs Talia? The pranks were very good. I especially like that Led was infected with nano clanks! Led Luthor is one of the worst evils of DC. He corrupted the Justice system enough he was never punished. The authors should have had him die. One of his plans could have killed him, laboratory accident! |
![]() ![]() So the HELL INVASION ARC has ended. This chapter could have been a summary epilogue. But thanks for not stopping here. Please PLEASE Pretty Please... Continue, Write the rest of the story. :) Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never ever bother replying to one of my reviews. Just please write and post another chapter. As nice as a reply is, another chapter is better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Celina robbing Ra's all Ghul of everything! I love it! Thanks for writing and sharing with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reviews are random. Some chapters you will get more than others. Some good stories are also very under reviewed. I have no idea why. Flamers should be extinguished! With liquid nitrogen! Or just ignored... |