Amazing story still my favorite till this day. Hope you find inspiration to get back to this but it's been 5 years so I guess it's safe to say this is abandoned.

Came to review just to say, thank you for sharing a story that came out of your head. May your future endeavors be fruitful.

Who is growing old!
You said in the UN that you've cured old age.
And even if you didn't just provide her with some NaNo-Clanks.
Great story so far.

Great story. Hope you come back to this.

Having recently seen Thor Ragnarok which also used Immigrant Song to great effect, the imagery of the 40 yaegerkin (I'm imagining something along the lines of Marines from Star Craft or Fallout Power Armor here) wading through smoke spewing fire is just amazing, and I wish someone would make a CG animation of it... actually, using Fallout 4's engine it might actually not be that hard.

Please continue the story. I think you captured Xander perfectly. I can't wait to see where this goes.

awesome amusing how the joker met his end

A good few years ago I read this story. I came away happy

I am now we reading your story and I feel sick. By this chapter

Your character bloodlust and nonrational decision-making
is incredibly insane

Is your characters all works. He conceded that a group of terrorists attacked his country and killed gypsies

And his reaction was
don't immediately kill the terrorists, but to plot to conquer the poor relation of Kasnia that is suffering terrorists
everyday

He immediately ordered his military to kill hundreds of thousands of police and military and government employers on masse
even though they won his side in fighting the terrorists

He is punishing them because they both have the same enemy

The the rest of the world needs to unite and deal with this evil dictator

Forcibly turning millions of his population into monsters
mass summary execution
forcibly compulsory giving everybody super technology inside their bodies without fully informing them of what they were agreeing to
and out of a population don't you think several percent wouldn't have the treatment therefore you made it compulsory

This people are his slaves

I absolutely LOVED your story! So many twists and turns and angles. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for it. Great job and keep up the great work.

loved all the plot twists, the joker was being stupid. but on the other hand he was used to batman's way of thinking so he could not have previously known about Xander's line of thought.

is the over

very good

Love the story hope u come back to writing this

Just finished reading through your awesome story for the third time and I still like it. I just wish you would come back and finish it.

OK OK, I was will to hold my tongue last chapter but the sexism in this chapter is over 900000!