Reviews for A Spark of Genius |
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![]() ![]() An olive tree that can be uprooted by grabbing a bunch of olives. Have you considered making houses out of this super strong olive tree breed? Either that or your understanding of physics needs work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am romanian. so this was an interesting read. i love when i see romania get some love. and it all logically and coherently is strung together. my only problem with this story are the sex scenes. they feel kind of corny and forced and awkward. xander is also too willing to go for it, it feels oc. but at the same time is it subtly awkward because xander is new to this? also, his costume heteo somthing, is a adventure scientist gentelmen, with clearly ready and willong to engange in those kinds of situations. also xander is a teenage boy. there is almost no man that would say no in those situations. also xander's after sex reaction is very on point. i love your subtle influence of xander's background. that stuff donesnt disappear. all in all, great story. maybe shorten the sex scenes. or even skip over them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() C'mon, we obviously know Cthullu does not Roar. but still a master touch I must say! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shiva doing a snoopy dance!? I can't say no! But I can't say yes either! AAAAAHAHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every solution to VIP problems "Show me the Money!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shits and Piss in the UN building? I think Superman might not want to go there right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you added the "Hell March" theme song...it's fucking glorious |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so not comfortable with that town |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that really Optimus? Or was it just a Wannabe Optimus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mercury is Roman not Greek, unless the DC multiverse messed that up and your just mentioning a DC character. considering Wonder Woman's name is Diana that's a good possibility. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just rereading this. Honestly? I would love if this fic was actually turned into a comic book or graphic novel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And his penis! Merlin that sausage is large" Jesus Christ. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww poor were-croc. also other stuff... I forget what though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, cute Xander fangirling about Superman! And I'm glad to see he got to keep his Heterodyne powers. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this; please update or say if your leaving it.. |