Reviews for A Spark of Genius
Guest chapter 27 . 10/10/2017
An olive tree that can be uprooted by grabbing a bunch of olives. Have you considered making houses out of this super strong olive tree breed? Either that or your understanding of physics needs work.
Sir Cookie chapter 15 . 9/29/2017
i am romanian. so this was an interesting read. i love when i see romania get some love. and it all logically and coherently is strung together.

my only problem with this story are the sex scenes. they feel kind of corny and forced and awkward. xander is also too willing to go for it, it feels oc. but at the same time is it subtly awkward because xander is new to this? also, his costume heteo somthing, is a adventure scientist gentelmen, with clearly ready and willong to engange in those kinds of situations. also xander is a teenage boy. there is almost no man that would say no in those situations. also xander's after sex reaction is very on point. i love your subtle influence of xander's background. that stuff donesnt disappear.

all in all, great story. maybe shorten the sex scenes. or even skip over them.
MOR the Divine Being chapter 38 . 9/24/2017
C'mon, we obviously know Cthullu does not Roar. but still a master touch I must say!
MOR the Divine Being chapter 31 . 9/23/2017
Shiva doing a snoopy dance!? I can't say no! But I can't say yes either! AAAAAHAHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
MOR the Divine Being chapter 18 . 9/23/2017
Every solution to VIP problems "Show me the Money!"
MOR the Divine Being chapter 17 . 9/23/2017
Shits and Piss in the UN building? I think Superman might not want to go there right now
MOR the Divine Being chapter 16 . 9/23/2017
I like how you added the "Hell March" theme song...it's fucking glorious
MOR the Divine Being chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
I am so not comfortable with that town
MOR the Divine Being chapter 3 . 9/23/2017
Was that really Optimus? Or was it just a Wannabe Optimus?
Battlesny chapter 27 . 9/12/2017
Mercury is Roman not Greek, unless the DC multiverse messed that up and your just mentioning a DC character. considering Wonder Woman's name is Diana that's a good possibility.
Nightmare723764 chapter 15 . 9/9/2017
Just rereading this. Honestly? I would love if this fic was actually turned into a comic book or graphic novel!
Helixical chapter 4 . 9/6/2017
"And his penis! Merlin that sausage is large"

Jesus Christ.
Battlesny chapter 11 . 9/6/2017
aww poor were-croc.
also other stuff... I forget what though
BrilliantLady chapter 2 . 9/3/2017
Awww, cute Xander fangirling about Superman! And I'm glad to see he got to keep his Heterodyne powers. :)
Mister LaGuardia chapter 45 . 8/30/2017
Love this; please update or say if your leaving it..
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