Reviews for Mate and Mother
Frenzy In Delirium chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
When I read this story, I was thinking, "This person stole this idea from someone else, but then I realized you wrote the same one-shot I was thinking about." I'm glad you are continuing the the one-shot Mate and Mother :) Loved this :)
JeaBaby chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
i like it update soon plz cant wait till chapter 2!
pmvb11 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I am loving it! Can't wait for more.
twimama77 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
cool but wasnt charlie the one abusing her
TinksVamps chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I like the start of this story and it looks like it is going to be a corker. Good job and lets have some more chapters soon xxx
stacypotterblack chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
OMG! I LOVE this story! I can't wait to read more!

SPB
PixieQueen1223 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
This story has a wonderful beginning and I hope that you continue with it very soon.
5SecsOfLARRYcat chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA READ MORE! :)
5SecsOfLARRYcat chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA READ MORE!
unknown349 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
this storys amazing update soon x
izzy chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
ooooh..so interesting i would really love an update..i forseee your story will be one of my favorite fanfictions :DDD anyways go go..write write write..don't listen to evil criticisms..youuu gotta fight fight fight..lawl..but srsly..update asap..and it would be lovely if you do it constantly :D hehehe i hope youuu will
Angel JJK chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Love it! Yay so happy you've made the one shot into a story! Can't wait for more, please update soon!
Simaril chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
A very exciting start to a story.

I love Carlisle/Bella stories and there aren’t as many as I would like.

I like the way you have set for their relationships, I don’t like the Evil Esme or worse the Dead Esme set up that is often used in these stories; Esme is too sweet to portray as evil. Funnily enough I love Jasper/Bella stories and I always enjoy an Evil Alice set up with them.

Looking forward to reading more, do you have an update schedule in mind?
CoralElizabeth chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Definitely want to read more please update soon
Reluctant Twilight Fan chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I like it, I do. But why did you convert it? I look forward to more! PLEASE UPDATE ALL YOUR STORIES QUICKLY!
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