Reviews for How to Conquer Kanto in Eight Easy Steps
Seas and Shadows chapter 88 . 4/18


Too saaaaaaaadddd! Need happiness!

But seriously, good job.
Seas and Shadows chapter 87 . 4/1
It finally hit me.

Primeape is GONE.


I liked Primeape...

Keep it up!
FourthMind chapter 9 . 3/22
Cliffhanger: DUM, DUM, DUM!
Species Unknown chapter 87 . 3/21
...So, two options, one: the usual protaganist meraculously survives, or two: Alaska dies and it continues on with Sandy.
FourthMind chapter 8 . 3/21
The evil plan begins...
At least they aren't the cliche type.
FourthMind chapter 7 . 3/21
You're skipping the forest? Cool!
FourthMind chapter 6 . 3/21
Parting is a sorrow but sometimes it could give us a new joy.
Or maybe not...
FourthMind chapter 5 . 3/21
Take that Chloe! Way to go Alaska!
FourthMind chapter 4 . 3/21
I hate those two rivals already.
FourthMind chapter 3 . 3/21
When the guard seemed happy that Alaska wanted to be a Trainer, I have the feeling that most of the kids are afraid to go on a journey.
FourthMind chapter 2 . 3/21
Alaska sounds like a funny bitch...
Is she really short?
FourthMind chapter 1 . 3/21
Looks fun! That Gideon guy must be a mad doctor.
Rediamond chapter 86 . 2/18
Well, a late review is better than no review, right?

I'm going to start off with some grammatical errors before moving onto subjective stuff.

The first line had an error. Read it. You'll notice.

First sentence of paragraph five *though she knew THERE must be some level of awareness there.
"Looker turned to her..." is in italics for no discernible reason. As are phrases beginning "there was a groan..." "any disruption..." and "all involved in this..." Maybe it was intentional, but I could not figure out why.

Other errors: *her dad's old movies (apostrophe)
*has happened to me, Mr Melton (comma)

Which is not many problems in a lot of words. Good job.

Subjectively, that fall would be just shy of seven seconds unless Gallade was slowing it from the beginning. That's a lot of thought in seven seconds.

And oh, boy. Incoming bond villain monologue followed by ironic deus ex machina to save her from godlike machines. Such irony. Unless there is no deus ex and everyone dies randomly. Although I don't quite think you're going there. Or maybe you will. I have no idea.

I'll see you when you tell me.
MountainLord-92 chapter 86 . 2/13
Hefty dose of reality for Alaska. nicely done
Species Unknown chapter 86 . 2/13
Welp. i'd say that the EMP detonation that nukes create would be the best way to go about this.
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