|Reviews for All I Ever Asked For|
| Jade chapter 1 . 4/13
Oh my gosh! I love this story it's so good I can't wait for the next chapter, If you know of any other story's similar to this this love to read. I love this and I think you should totally keep writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Please update it's too good to end it here
| Torikki Jinx chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
The beginning's cool but the ending is shit. It's too fast, I bet you were in a hurry typing this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
No pool more chapter please (sobbing)
| KingCrab-5D's-RivalGIII chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
i think this would be better as a multi-chapter story
| kittykitty34 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Awwh I like this story(:
| Tristi Lynne chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
it really interesting it would be great if u could continue it into a full story
| beyondthedemons chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
wtf... that was really good until the ending... u really shouldnt have rushed the ending so much
| saku642734 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
very awesome story :D loved reading it
| Cleopatra chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
| XxKaede chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Oh so sad my eyes are teary at the end :(
| A Hero in Progress chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
OHZ-MAHZ-GODZ! i love this its so cute i cant help but smile its so adorable i really cant wait for your next update! I NEED THE BEAUTIFUL WORDS U TYPE DOWN TO MEET MY EYES! i wuv it! XD
COWS TROW UP LUCKY CHARMS AND SKITTLES, TASTE THE FREAKING RAINBOW!
| death die choose chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Chapter story please...bye and choose
| luckeyslove7 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
OMG! I love love loved it! You have to make more... Please!?