This just made my heart go to mush
This is so sweet

Dumbledore is such a perverted bastard!
I want to throw up!"such a bad boy", I mean ewwww!
Seriously tho great job you are so talented with writing.

Go choke on a dick, Marge you useless bitch.

Dumbledore, you fucking bastard...

Guest reviewer here!
Love your story, am waiting for the next chapter, please upload quickly!
Also, there's no mention of Aunt Marge after Dudley is taken in by the Potters. I expected her to cause some havoc. Custody battle for Dudley and the like...
Anyway, absolutely love your story, please upload the next chapter quickly...

This piece is my unashamed favorite, surpassing even Harry Crow.
Barely.
I think I love this piece the most because it draws the least from Cannon, in this story we get to see your writing so, we get to see the way your brain works much like in your Fates Gambit duet.
And it has nothing at all of course to do with the clever way you eliminated Tom Riddle, the way you turn the Marauders in the captains of industry, and of course the fact that lightsabers naturally make everything better. ;p
This piece is fresh, wholesome, and in a standout from what you usually write, it does not focus extensively on Harry and Hermione developing their relationship.
This is my wife's favorite piece by you, and I have to agree with her that it is without a doubt an excellent read.
As always Thank You.

I loved this story! It was so sweet! Keep on writing, you have a lot of talent!

*snickers*

Marge is going to be waiting awhile, isn't she? The magicals all apparated out, after all.

While you’re reinventing your other stories, it’d be cool to see the next steps in this one. Who were the first grandparents? How did Sirius and James respond to Remus’ date to the wedding? How did life change at Oxford with the addition of our kids? What kinds of mischief did those MiniMauraders manage? So many questions!

I just love this story. It gets better and better with each treasured rereading. Thanks for making it!

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I love this story so much I shared the link to my friends on FB. I wanted to message you privately to ask if you had pdf versions of your stories anywhere so that I could have them in my offline library or if you didn't would it be okay if I made my own? I started archiving for my own private digital library twenty years ago when I was reading Xena and Buffy fan fiction. It has saved some of my favorite stories for me to read that were taken down for one reason or another.

This is too sunshine and roses that it is unrealistic

Tiny bit cheesy and cringy - the whole story