Reviews for The Final Defense of The Dying
HybridsRose chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Aww, I really liked this, and I thought you achieved your goal of capturing the essence of Peeta in this.
I love the motto 'a leg is a leg', and 'life is life'!
LeLa London chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Very nice insight to Peeta's world. :D
Rice chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Fantastic story. Peeta would be dealing with these questions, and you explored them in a deep but funny way. I think you did a great job of capturing Peeta's personality. He's clever, kind, has a self-deprecating sense of humor, and loves fully.
Lightning4022 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
This was fantastic. I found it on the Best of the Hunger Games community, and it truly is the best. Well done! I hate how in Mockingjay, Peeta's character is totally trashed by Collins, but you did a magnificent 'character therapy' and brought him back to the Peeta that we know and love. Thank you.
Niamh chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Professional. Passionate. Heartfelt. And well, pretty brilliant.

Other than that I'm lost for word...amazing!
Howlynn chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Love the end wrap - you had me suspecting that katniss was dead so the end had a good little punch of sappy without going over the cliff - very well done
emptyvessels chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Wonderfully written. I like the little peek inside Peeta's mind :)
brooke13243546 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Nice storie!
Skia9 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Wow. This was amazing!

I loved the imagery. My favorite part was most definitely the first paragraph. It just... it's perfect.

Keep writing. This is great!
Grace chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This was beyond beautiful:)

you captured Peeta so well its phenomenal
Icy-Zoe chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
! Awesome!
Nowhere Is Darkness chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Yup. Icing is the final step of dying when you are Peeta.

I feel bad for Peeta, really really bad stuff happens to him

1. Got entered to the hungergames

his life, joined the careers to save Katniss

leg

a girl that doesnt know if she loves him

5. Got kidnapped by the capitol

hijacked

entire family is dead

8. He is gone cuckoo*

9. Went on another mission to kill Snow

friends being killed :( (Finnick) :(
Becca chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I really loved this. You are an excellent writer, though I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself. There were some awkward sentences. Overall, great job. :]
RandomGeek chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
It's nice to see a story about Peeta that isn't completely bashing him or about him and Katniss. I really liked it.
Deleted account no. 383428 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
this is good i'm so happy for peeta!a leg is a leg... i like that one :)
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