Would be a great fic if some intimate moments were cut, intrigue works best in hearttearing fics.

Great story. I feel like it fits in well, and it’s so sad, raw and painfully full of truth, but hope as well. Life would be so much easier if our feelings would just conform to logic. Thanks for sharing

This is a very interesting story. I feel it makes sense for Katniss to continue punishing Peeta (and herself) before she finds the bit of peace she has in the epilogue. I can sympathise too that she finds herself so full of anger when she knows it’s not a fair way to behave. Thanks for sharing

Oh myyyyyyy! This fanfic should be renamed, “The List of Ways Peeta Pounds Katniss.” I mean, wow, it’s spicy stuff! Very enjoyable M-grade scenes though.

Also pretty well-plotted and I appreciated the non-fluffy tension between P & K. Their ups and downs added a lot of interest from chapter to chapter.

The only thing different I would’ve wished for is the incorporation of the “You love me. Real or not real,” which was the best thing about SC’s otherwise disappointing close to the series. It’s missing from this fanfic, an oversight that doesn’t seem necessary IMO.

Otherwise, loved it!

Very good job. Lovely dialogues and descriptions.

Wow this Katniss is delusional, crazy, selfish and everything you will hate in a human been... She is an enemy to others and herself...

Well Done. Thanks!

any intention to update at all?

God damn it! why the hell did you abandon all these amazing stories? So freaking unfaire :(

Great story!

Sometimes I feel like I've read all the good Everlark ff out there but then I come across something like this! I absolutely adore this story! Definitely going on my favs list!

I can't get enough of this story. I want to wrap is up and devour it and keep it all to myself, it's so freaking good! Ugh!

Awww

This is awesome!
Love it

Lovely story, and so well written.