It bothers me in this story that Katniss treats Peeta's emotional traumas so carelessly. She impatient, irritable, and just downright hateful with him sometimes. I'm wondering if that was your intention?

This was so beautiful. It had a good amount of conflict to make it real. That special was so Plutarch.

Love it!

I am in love with this fic, can't believe I only just came across it

Peeta is the cutest! Engaged! I'm so happy it happened that way! It was so cute!

I've returned to read this story probably six times, every time i need a Peeta-Katniss fix. It's composed in a manner consistent with not only the original piece but the characters as we have come to know them. Thank you for sharing this with us!

This was a really interesting and beautiful fic. Xxx

ADORABLE.

The writing is undeniably good but I can't help disliking the way you portray Peeta. He is meant to be kind and gentle, but on many occasions you give him the image of something bad. I do not intend this as an insult, I'm just frustrated at your portrayal of the boy with the bread.

Very good, probably the best Hunger Games fabric I've read!

Thank you!

I really love your story and the concept is lovely based on one of hijacked Peeta's lines that is my favorite!

Will you ever post the last chapter?

Lovely story! You've drawn the characters very well :D

I think what I liked most about this story is the way you incorporated that list of words Peeta used to describe Katniss into their struggles of growing back together after the war. It's unique in it's own way because every post-rebellion story I've read has yet to mention the aftermath and preliminary stages of the mission into the Capitol in the way you have. So I'm definitely impressed and this will be going on my recommendations page on Tumblr and my favorites. Thanks for writing and publishing it! :)

BRILLIANT. That was excellent!
You've captured the essence of all the characters wonderfully. Your writing for this fanfic is perfect. I swear I feel like I just finished reading the fourth book or an epilogue.
Thank you for this story! Certainly looking forward to more :)