Reviews for The List of Words |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is just great! Can't wait for the next chapter! Plzz Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I can't wait for more! I love the characterizations, the pace of the story, everything! Please continue! Absolutely fantastic! Thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was kind of worried about how this chapter would start after the end of the last chapter. BAM, was everything suddenly going to be okay? Was it going to be super cheesy? Nope! It played out perfectly and was completely believable. There's so much STUFF these two have to work through, and it was nice to see them just beginning to do that here. This chapter has been my favorite so far and I'm really, really looking forward to seeing where you take this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still loving this! I'll just go ahead and list all of the things I love so I'm not constantly saying "I love this!" 1. The way Peeta and Katniss just stand at the window and stare towards each other after nightmares. Even at their most connected moments, there's still so many walls separating them. 2. Peeta. He's SO in character to me, especially as he's trying to find his way back. It's a hard line to walk, I would think, because he's really a completely different person as a result of his experiences, but...he's also still the same person. So how do you balance those two sides? Well, you're doing it perfectly. 3. Your graphic, but not ridiculous, sex scene. It's HARD to write sex and not make it cheesy and awful and just painful to read! So kudos, it was wonderful! Thanks for writing such a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I just DEVOURED "The Hunger Games" series in the last 3 days, one after another, and still can't get enough. Of course I turned to fan fic, and this is the first story I decided looked decent enough to warrant my clicking the link. And I'm really glad I did! I LOVE "your" Katniss - she's kept that sense of disorientation and confusion when it comes to Peeta. She really has no idea what love is or what it should feel like, and just like in the series, her feelings tend to come off selfishly because she doesn't know how to express herself, even in her own head. I also love the entire premise for the story, exploring the different facets of those words Peeta listed. And THIS just broke my heart, especially the last line: There's no need to tell them that I gathered this information during the only conversation I've had with my mother since I left District Thirteen with the Star Squad. The one where we cried over Prim until both of our throats and hearts were raw from admissions of guilt and neglect, from claiming different ways in which we could have saved her. The one where my mother ended our talk by giving me a laundry list of excuses why she could never return to District 12 or look into my eyes again. UGH, wonderful. I loved this first chapter and can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfiction is FANTASTIC! The best Hunger Games one i've read :) keep updating please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! it's like... perfect. i was so peed off at suzanne collins for just ending it like 1 1/2 page epalauge i was like wtf i neeeeed more! she was goin on and on about there relationship and then she decides well i it'll think it will b fine,and ends it. this shld b the REAL ending (: member katniss gets preggo,hehe i cant wait 4 tht,i want to hear both peetas and katniss thots(: haha i love them soo much and i love their relationship and i absolutly love peeta, i wish they made guys like him in real life . i wish my life was a book or a movie...it wld b so awesomly exciting and perfect(: but anyways,fatastic fanfiction and i cant wait to read more its defintly my fave of the hunger games fan fics(: so...UPDATE!... LIKE RLY SOON!...LIKE NOW!...YEA GET AT IT!...PLZ? *PUPPY DOG FACE* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! This is a really great story! Please Update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't read many Hunger games fics & this one's awesome- please update soon! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I just finished reading the Hunger Games and I love Katniss and Peeta together. You've done a very nice job on the story thusfar. Additionally: I always catch the clock, it's 11:11 and now you want to talk That song always sounds best live. |
![]() ![]() I love your story , because you manage to capture the characters just right... please keep writing. |
![]() ![]() this is great! |
![]() ![]() Good story. I like how you have kept the characters true to their original form and personalities. Please keep writing. Good stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! Please continue! |