Reviews for The List of Words
lovelyhyperchick chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
I really like this! Keep it up
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
Really good chapter! You MUSIT update soon!
kerij chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Oh, you do such a great job with these characters...love it! Please keep it up :)
Kure-ji Faia chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
OMG! i loveeee it! :D

When Katniss said "i dont want to be friends, Peeta" i was thinking 'if she doesnt mean that in the way i hope she means it im gonna slap her'... But she did mean it the way i wanted, so its all good! :)

Thank you for writing such an awesome story.. and please continue.. :D
bbygoose chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Glad to find some HG fic. excited to read this :)
rhshorty95 chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
moreeee! sooon!
Skittles001 chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
I adore this. It's so sweet, and very in character. The new chapter is great, keep up the good work. I love your writing style.
Owlsk8r chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
You did a really good job capturing all the emotions! Nice job. Keep up the good work! :)
Kure-ji Faia chapter 2 . 11/28/2010
awesome! i love it! :D

and i loveeee Peeta! :DDD

please continue this, it would be interesting to see what happens next xD
ZafiraMente chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
I enjoyed overall, and I'm going to give constructive feedback on the adult portion.

This actually rather a personal annoyance of mine, as it seems to happen in every single fic in every genre that I've read that gets at all graphic about sex - A guy's finger? Yeah, it's really not that fun having it inside you. About as fun as a tampon (which is to say - not). I've had two kids and my fair portion of sex - if fingers are involved, they are stimulating, not spelunking. :)

I know how awkward it is to write an adult scene, I personally can't do it, but I had to throw that out there. And semi-related, never underestimate the power of less description, more "fade to black". Sometimes that is even more powerful than a fully described encounter.

Keep working, you are a very good writer overall :)
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 2 . 11/17/2010
Thats not it right? Not the end I mean. YOur going to write more, right? Right! Update soon!
lunazero chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
I am so grateful that there is at least one wonderfully written fic for The Hunger Games out there. I feel that you captured the characters very well, and I am glad you chose such tense material to write about. The title caught me right away, the writing style kept me hooked. Go with your gut feeling on the writing; you are doing marvelously so far. I cannot wait to see how you continue with chapter three. Katniss and Peeta were not children during the books, and they surely aren't now. ;)

Favorites!
Insane4House chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
ooo me likey ). and your lemon wasn't too bad for a first one. I think instead of taking a couple of weeks to write each chapter, you should just turn into a writing frenzy and get them out within a couple of days. ). Then I would love you.
EmmaFKnightly chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I really love this so far! Thank you so much and I'm eager to see what happens next.
melissa chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
amazing!

please write more!
395 | « Prev Page 1 .. 15 22 23 24 25 26 .. Last Next »