Reviews for The List of Words |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this! Keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter! You MUSIT update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you do such a great job with these characters...love it! Please keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! i loveeee it! :D When Katniss said "i dont want to be friends, Peeta" i was thinking 'if she doesnt mean that in the way i hope she means it im gonna slap her'... But she did mean it the way i wanted, so its all good! :) Thank you for writing such an awesome story.. and please continue.. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to find some HG fic. excited to read this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() moreeee! sooon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this. It's so sweet, and very in character. The new chapter is great, keep up the good work. I love your writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a really good job capturing all the emotions! Nice job. Keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! i love it! :D and i loveeee Peeta! :DDD please continue this, it would be interesting to see what happens next xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed overall, and I'm going to give constructive feedback on the adult portion. This actually rather a personal annoyance of mine, as it seems to happen in every single fic in every genre that I've read that gets at all graphic about sex - A guy's finger? Yeah, it's really not that fun having it inside you. About as fun as a tampon (which is to say - not). I've had two kids and my fair portion of sex - if fingers are involved, they are stimulating, not spelunking. :) I know how awkward it is to write an adult scene, I personally can't do it, but I had to throw that out there. And semi-related, never underestimate the power of less description, more "fade to black". Sometimes that is even more powerful than a fully described encounter. Keep working, you are a very good writer overall :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats not it right? Not the end I mean. YOur going to write more, right? Right! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so grateful that there is at least one wonderfully written fic for The Hunger Games out there. I feel that you captured the characters very well, and I am glad you chose such tense material to write about. The title caught me right away, the writing style kept me hooked. Go with your gut feeling on the writing; you are doing marvelously so far. I cannot wait to see how you continue with chapter three. Katniss and Peeta were not children during the books, and they surely aren't now. ;) Favorites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooo me likey ). and your lemon wasn't too bad for a first one. I think instead of taking a couple of weeks to write each chapter, you should just turn into a writing frenzy and get them out within a couple of days. ). Then I would love you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this so far! Thank you so much and I'm eager to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() amazing! please write more! |