Reviews for The Crush
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
wow this was a good one shot thank you for sharing this with us. That would be interesting to have a very hot good looking guy watch you but it would also be nice to know how he really feels
TinaF chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Loved it!
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Voyeurism...niiiice, and who's a more crazy-hot turn-on to go voyeuristic on than the forever freak-hot Jasper. Descriptions of snapshots of Bella's via mirror views of their encounters were deliciously vivid. And an OMF to Jasper's increased intensity and thrusting (omf, again) once he knew Bella was watching- - as he locked eyes with her in the mirror.

Lovely, ultra-yum, leaves-one-panting-for-more, snapshot of a sexual paradise.
catauragay chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Ooh, I would love to be Bella.
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Hello. Nice way to end it! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
TheDarkPlume chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I LOVE this story! Jasper and Bella having sex with Edward and Alice so close by was hot. My only criticism is that maybe you could've expanded more on that. Bella keeps her eye on the door and has to keep quiet, but how does she feel? Nervous? Excited? What sorta sounds do their bodies make as they struggle to keep quiet?

Anyway, I definitely enjoyed this story. Great job!
NativeMoon95 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Not fucking fair! Update pleeeeeeaaaaadsssssseeeeee?
wendy1969 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
different. it has ended so as you could continue, hasnt it?

thanx for the one shot.
Sacred Burning chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Well, deary, this story is amazing. I love it, and it wasn't hard tofollow for me at all, well written and everything. Keep up the good work !

Best wishes,

Sacred Burning
Anime Hottie Lovah chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
moore8879 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
This was hot!