|Reviews for The Crush|
| fri13girl chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Ooh, I would love to be Bella.
| J.DRAST chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Hello. Nice way to end it! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
| TheDarkPlume chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I LOVE this story! Jasper and Bella having sex with Edward and Alice so close by was hot. My only criticism is that maybe you could've expanded more on that. Bella keeps her eye on the door and has to keep quiet, but how does she feel? Nervous? Excited? What sorta sounds do their bodies make as they struggle to keep quiet?
Anyway, I definitely enjoyed this story. Great job!
| NativeMoon95 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Not fucking fair! Update pleeeeeeaaaaadsssssseeeeee?
| wendy1969 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
different. it has ended so as you could continue, hasnt it?
thanx for the one shot.
| Sacred Burning chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Well, deary, this story is amazing. I love it, and it wasn't hard tofollow for me at all, well written and everything. Keep up the good work !
| Anime Hottie Lovah chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
o.o Jasper...I KNEW THERE WAS A REASON WHY I LOVED IT!
| moore8879 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
This was hot!