Reviews for Because I Promised
SesshomaruFreak chapter 17 . 9/8
So much fun! I love how they used the situation to make fun, sexy role play for their time together.
That was wonderful! So freakin hot and just *growls* yeah.

Loved the moment between Ren and Riki, too. Boy probably lost his mind over the honor :)

Did I mention how scorching the lemon was? Cause I got 3rd degree burns over here. Omg incredible.

A lovely story overall and ohmygoodness it's complete! Lol very well done, darling!
SesshomaruFreak chapter 16 . 9/8
Omg that was close!
Grief does terrible things to people.
SesshomaruFreak chapter 15 . 9/8
Dammit.
Everyone in that room sucks.
SesshomaruFreak chapter 14 . 9/8
Screw central46. It pissed me off when, after Aizen's betrayal, and obvious proof that the whole system was convoluted, the first thing the 'powers that be' did was to reinstate the exact. Same. System.

Hey um I think you might've stuck Tetsuya in here by mistake? Ginrei and Nori are the ones that came into Bya's cell and that's who he was talking to, but at one point it says Tetsuya, though a moment later Bya still says 'Nori' So umm I dunno but thought I'd let you know that either his name showed up by mistake/too soon, or that part may need rewritten cause it's a bit confusing.
Starting here-
He watched in silence as she left and was about to make his way to the bed, when his cell door opened again and Head Elder, Kuchiki Nori entered along with Ginrei. Byakuya's grandfather looked calm, despite everything, but Tetsuya's eyes flared angrily.
[After this he's not mentioned again, and Bya says Nori]
SesshomaruFreak chapter 13 . 9/8
Aww their little bundle of hollow-turned-shinigami baby is ok!
Dude, old man, c'mon! How you gonna support these laws that are obviously skewed? Y'all would've killed a man who didn't need to die, for something he had no control over. You should be on your freakin knees thanking Bya for saving Renji from you psychos.
Pfft whatever *sulking*
SesshomaruFreak chapter 12 . 9/7
*deep breath*
My goodness that was so intense!
I love how Ichi was ready to take them all on to defend Bya :)
SesshomaruFreak chapter 11 . 9/7
Fucking beautiful, milady.
Not only was that a glorious double lemon, full of sexiness and love and hotness and healing, but you did the most marvelous job of making it from Renji's first-person pov, AND in present-tense.
Truly the work of an artist, love. I can tell you really put effort into its creation. It was so lovely, there aren't really words to do it justice, but this review is my attempt :)
SesshomaruFreak chapter 10 . 9/7
That was quick thinking on Yuu's part. Bet Ren was watching him real close lol
So Bya with no power, hmmm? If all the other stuff wasn't going on, there could be a whole other story for Bya and Ren right there ;)
Issues. So many issues. Lol
SesshomaruFreak chapter 9 . 9/7
Hollow or not, Renji won't let ANYONE HARM HIS BYA!
I got scared when Bya was hit in the back of the head, and I spent the next few lines all 'omg omg' then the door slammed open and I freakin knew it was Ren.
Hell, they got spotted, should've just let Ren cero that motherfucker in the face.
It was sweet how he took care of Bya afterwards.

Random thought- bet those necklaces look sexy on the boys lol
SesshomaruFreak chapter 8 . 9/7
Gorgeous chap
If they can just stay safe, there's a way to fix everything. Kisuke is a brilliant hero! *glomps and kisses Kisuke*
SesshomaruFreak chapter 7 . 9/7
It's like the hollow followed the connection Ren felt to Bya to make its own.
Renji and the hollow both are very attached to the noble- like how Bya had to say 'it's not that I don't want to talk to you'
Awww Ren gets one chance to talk and says 'I love you'
SesshomaruFreak chapter 6 . 9/7
A plague upon Aizen!

Renji/hollow snatched Bya away from those guards and then was trying to protect him from the hollows. Might have worked better if Bya hadn't panicked.
I know he was scared, but even in the midst of hollowfying, Ren would've protected him.
SesshomaruFreak chapter 5 . 9/7
Aww Ren and his monster were trying to get to Bya.
Rikichi is awesome.
Unohana is awesome too. She's gotta know something's not right here but still kept Ren under watch and said Bya should stay.
Old man done pissed me off.
SesshomaruFreak chapter 4 . 9/7
Dann old man.
Secrets and lies and screwed-up orders is how Aizen was able to betray y'all so soundly, and your solution is to keep lying and keeping shit 'classified'
Dumbass.
I might have to kill him.

Thank goodness for Kisuke.
SesshomaruFreak chapter 3 . 9/7
Ohh man. Renji's in bad shape. The monster has tried to hurt Bya twice now, but he's still in there.
Damn Aizen to hell! So fucking furious with him!

Oh this is one of the stories I meant with the bold opening lines. They give me chills.

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I was used to the darkness and to the sting of pain, but you pulled me back into the light. A shock to the senses…and the sight of my face in a mirror…was enough to tell me that you should have left me to my fate.
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Just damn. I love every word you write. Your talent is extraordinary.
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