Reviews for The Ultimate Betrayal
Non-User chapter 5 . 7/10/2014
Awesome! :) I love this a ton more than the actual book. I know, I am using criticism, but it's Gerard Montaigne, not Gerald. Sorry:(
Non-user chapter 3 . 7/10/2014
Well, isn't 'Willow' Willo? Sorry if I sounded rude...
anonyomus chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
where's the other chapters? you prmised please update it :(
Azzia chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
You spell Alistar wrong.
Elise chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
This is really, really cool. Awesome story, ty much for writing it- and pls,pls continue to?
mtwon chapter 5 . 12/16/2011
This is really good! Please continue, even if the new book is out! I like this, it is actually really similar to what I imagined. So, pleeeaaassseee update? Please please please please please.
Flaming Man of Iron chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
This is an interesting story! I hope you keep it up!
chessrd chapter 5 . 9/14/2011
Personally, I think Han would be quite upset, but I like it nonetheless! Update, please!
Indain chapter 5 . 8/8/2011
I honestly hate you, for leaving us at such a cruel point in the story, i was going to enjoy this with hot chocolate but you just had to be mean and make us wait *cries*
Indain chapter 4 . 8/8/2011
Loved IT.
Indain chapter 3 . 8/8/2011
How do you do this? Like seriously, im actually considering this to be real. I dont usually do that with fan ficiton :o
Indain chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
once again a short but lovable chapter!
Indain chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Im still shaking with that chapter! But, truthfully, it could be longer.
lp chapter 5 . 8/8/2011
love it
stephen chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
please update soon I need More!
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