Reviews for Miss America
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I could not tell at all where you left off and where you finished. It all was smooth to me.

Might also be that I'm just super tired and have to go to the bathroom...

I thought this was adorable. So, do not worry. I think Tony was so cute, and his concerns were real.

Good job.
apedarling chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
pretty sure i liked all of it:) loved tony telling zi that he cared so much.
cadyblu chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Your story conveyed a lot of emotion in a few short words. Very nicely done and in character. I think when no one else is around, Tony and Ziva really do relax each other. Thanks for uploading.
Betherzz chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
its a great little story ;) thanks for the great read
Madison chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Really good u should write more stories about tiva. Funny too :)