Yep I can’t read anymore of this too much angst and stupidity from all the characters in this story.

This plot sucks Naruto is so weak and never gets stronger there is basically no difference in the outcome of this story and the show.

This is such a cliche tho, I feel like I’ve read something like this couple of times already

„May you burn with the Will of Fire“ had me cracking up, I don’t know if it’s on purpose or not

Fuck you for killing asuma lmao

I know you finished this ages ago but can I just say, actually making them killers, which is what would really happen, and the consequences of that? Fucking fantastic honestly, love it

I hope naruto will learn more about wind element with asuma and in future mastering kurama's chakra so he can infuse Biju Dama Rasengan with wind element that will create an ultimate jutsu called Dai Rasenringu (Menma's "Evil Naruto" technique on Naruto Road To Ninja Movie)

what a let down

its like naruto and the other two are equal even though its stated multiple times that naruto is well ahead of both them. just so you can create the chemistry btw naruto and ino you make him make mistakes and ino is the one who helps him in the end ... and its like he is never giving his all . its nice and all to see him struggle but make the ones weaker than him to bail hi. out is frustrating

Oh man, just absolutely loving this fic. was ecstatic to see that there was a sequel. not going to lie, knowing where the story was at and how much longer I had was making me worry.

loving the story! wish there were some more filler moments tho

Honestly meant to comment a few chapters ago, but I'm so enthralled with this that I forgot.

Narutos attitude is quite interesting and I'm liking it. I personally think some of it is due to the Kyuubis influence but it could just be how things are playing out.

Enjoying the read so far and I love the chapter length!

I an thoroughly impressed. You were able to get a great hook going while also pushing past the initial information needed to let the reader know what's going on without rehashing overused themes. Very excited to see where this goes!

Fuck Sasuke