Reviews for Patriot's Dawn
Zaytunger chapter 3 . 4/10
fuck this is annoying. feminazis on the charge and our mc became simp to their schemes. f you woke cunt. him being an antagonist towards the village would be a more enticing story than this trash.
Ravendle chapter 2 . 3/31
yk i love that analogy ramen is a better way to say seal and kunai
WoodenDraconis chapter 1 . 3/26
Well, when you think about it, in canon Naruto was probably the stealthiest of his team. Everyone just thought that he was a stupid loudmouth that didn't know the definition of stealth. You gotta remember though, he painted the Hokage monument in full view of everyone and no one noticed. While wearing bright orange. He also stole the Forbidden Scroll of Seals from the Hokage office. WHILE WEARING BRIGHT ORANGE!
papitue chapter 6 . 3/24
You make too much out of character, yeah i understand that being said when your kid that some people are gonna kill you and all, but that much to just be antipathie as fuck is really weir for Naruto.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
Ah. Dobe and teme.

Teme is not a noun. It is a form of second person address.

Furthermore, Sasuke only called Naruto "dobe" one time in all of Naruto. Before his defection, he called Naruto "usuratonkachi" a lot, but for some reason, nobody uses that.

Dropped.
PaleFeed chapter 18 . 2/19
The worst part of this story is that you keep killing people off in ways that dont really advance the plot and are only written for a shock factor
Yuzuki476 chapter 1 . 2/18
Thank you for making this a naruto story and with itachi warning naruto and Gai helping him.
lukeanimelover chapter 2 . 2/1
Why wouldnt they complete the inoshikacho? It wouldve made more sense for kiba and naruto to be replaced instead. Or better yet just keep the teams cannon.
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 8 . 1/16
Fu$k!
Por Un Momento Tuve Esperanza
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 7 . 1/16
Perfecto
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 6 . 1/16
Me Encant├│
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 5 . 1/16
Encantador
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 4 . 1/16
Fantástico
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 2 . 1/15
Encantador
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 1/15
Un Excelente Comienzo!
perfecto
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