Reviews for Innocent Life: The Final Goodbye
Jude chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
I really appreciate that game and the story of this game i was crying also even im not the end of the story
Puppeteer of Chaos chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
... Reminds me of doctor who... Always alone.
A Fan chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Oh my god. THIS IS SO FUDGIN' SAD. Since I'm a huge fan of this game, this fanfic really mad me... "sweat through my eyes"
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
not bad
kyle chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
well vita can't die if you remember from the christmas party sharon said that the doctor's maid died and vita came to live with him and that "the doctor said vita came from the same place you did kyle." other than that a great story
Arigato chapter 1 . 11/24/2011

your freakingly good story made me cry...


i can't believe it...

am I crying ?

*sigh* life learned sad when died, he learned happiness when he have his own robot friend, and he learned love...maybe when he read this story ?

Ranali chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
My God, this is depressing. But it was supposed to be that way, so in this instance, it's a good thing. I know this story's a bit old and my review is overdue, but I read this last year and friggin' cried. I'd really hate immortality, Ik most people say, "Oh kewl, eternal life," but things like this kind of tell a person how it really is; Yea, you live forever, but what about everyone else, y'know? And people wonder why Vamps are all emo and perma-depressed. Um, got off topic there, but anyway, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this fic

Silvara chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
...You made me cryyyyyy X,O

It's terrible, terrible, terrible...

The poor boy. I always wondered about how marriage was handled in Innocent Life. - I never got the patience to fish the game. - Does the boy, err, robto actually marry like in the other Harvest Moons? No matter how I turn the query, Google won't give me any clu abou that XD
I like it chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Angsty. Great story. The ending was really good, the twelve year old thing
Bananafrak chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
That was a really deep story. Especially since the game was quite innocent and didn't include a marriage/love element in it, which I am sure many people were disappointed about (and is probably the reason why there isn't that much fanart out there). This story really captures the other side of the game, which only the fans feel (shipping goggles yay!). So, great work!

P.S. I though Vita was a robot too?
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
...Oh my god, that was really depressing. O_O Still, that was pretty good. I think it is sad that Life would never be able to die; and he would remain a twelve year old boy forever. :[

But anyway, I thought the ending around the funeral was just a little sappy; other than that, REALLY good story! :)

You probably won't get many reviews for this: being an Innocent Life story and all. But, this is still pretty good. And I always have liked the thought of LifexMarcia...

It's an interesting pairing.