Reviews for Sparks
Guest chapter 11 . 10/21
I love this story! Please write more!
avatawesomegirl10 chapter 11 . 4/10
This was a REALLY good story. Please update as soon as ya can. Its okay if ya hav writer's block. Every writter gets it sometimes.
avatawesomegirl10 chapter 1 . 4/10
I hav read ur Phantom Stallion fanfics before n I liked them so I know that this will be a good fic too. Ya should write more. Ya should try writin a Kaya: American Girl fanfics. Feicity n Kaya r my two favorite American Girl series.
Snappy15 chapter 6 . 3/30
I love this it is sooo emotional. *o*
Guest chapter 6 . 1/7
Lol - this is so funny. It's probably not supposed to be, but I can't take it seriously when it's all "Oh, Felicity!" "Oh, Ben!". You're not a half bad writer, though. I'd class you as good, actually as far as actual writing goes. Your plot and characterization however is positively ridden with cliches and somewhat laughable. I don't mean to offend and I hope I haven't, but your writing IS good. You just need practice (and considerably less than some).
SonOfArathorn88 chapter 11 . 6/22/2014
OMG! Sparks is like, my favorite fan fiction! I love it compared to the other felicity/Ben fan ficitons. Truly marvelous!
Egirl10HP chapter 9 . 3/17/2014
Could you write a story about Julie ?:)
Egirl10hp chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
I love it good job defenetly read
horselovr2000 chapter 11 . 3/15/2014
I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
luv chapter 10 . 3/14/2014
its a pity this isn't finished! i think she nad Ben should run away together!
me chapter 10 . 11/12/2013
then she could see that something was burning!
me chapter 9 . 11/12/2013
wow. did he say yes or no?
me chapter 8 . 11/12/2013
me chapter 7 . 11/12/2013
ewwwwwww! i thought that Marque was Winnie the horse gentlers friend?!
me chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
i just reviewed Chap. 5. I'm reviewing! please don't stop!
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