Reviews for The First Sin
BadWolf-212 chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
I absolutely love this story. Thrax and Odette are my favorite crossover pairing and it breaks my heart that there's hardly any stories of them out there. Please tell me you're going to write more for them!
AngeliaOmen chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Logged on to review this story properly. I found it to be utterly amazing, even though I'm more Thrax/Jane but I enjoyed your Thrax/Odette more than I thought I would. I just started really feeling Thrax out as a possible character and really liked the dark vibe from him in various videos on YouTube. I am really glad I stopped to read your story, hope you do more in the future!
Waffletime chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
All of this was so well writen. I truly appreciate the time you took to make such a wonderfully drafted fanfiction. How amazing this is! You are quite the author. Your skills impress me with no doubt. You have an amazing vocab, as well. It's very professional. It's very well described, and it makes me happy to know that some people have the discipline to take so much time and write a fanfiction for complete strangers. But you have enough passion for this type of thing and it's motivating. Really, thanks so much! And, anyone reading this review to see if they care to read this simple yet sufficient fanfiction, PLEASE DO READ THIS STORY! I'm sure anyone can enjoy such a well written Thrax/Odett themed story! But don't forget to review for the gracious author's sake! I'm sure she worked oh so hard on this! Ok. I shall now proceed to stop typing because this review must be very long. Bye!
Princess LaLaBlue chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
I know that you wrote this a while ago, but I had to tell you that this was a very beautiful and very well thought out story. I came here because I had been seeing a lot of the Thrax/Odette pairings on youtube too, and I needed to see if there was a fanfiction for it, and boy I was not disappointed. You have a very unique style, so again, thanks for the great read!
choxie-chan chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Oh my GOD 3 this is amazing! a wonderful done fanfic of this lovely pair! I really got into this fic, and enjoyed it all the way through! :O Great Job! I would love to read more of your works! :3
IHeart2896 chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
I watch thrax for one day and the next minute I demand to read stuff about him then I see this and it made me love thrax more. This was just so amazing! So descriptive and amazing!
DeviousxXxSmile chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!

There isnt enough fanfiction with Thrax and I just looked in the crossover section out of pure desperation.

Best. Decision. Ever.

If you write more Thrax/Odette (or Thrax/Anyone, really), I would SO be the first to read it! (or second, or know, depending on when I find out...or...if you actually DO write some more...Which I hope you do...*wink, wink, nudge,nudge*

Jackie-SugarSkull chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Good God, this was so deep, dark, lustful, and entrancing... and I LOVED every minute of it!

BTW, I lol'd at the name meanings!

'Thrax (American): an incredibly licentious devil; creature full of sexual appeal (That should be what it means! XD)'

A-freaking-men to THAT!
Akilah chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
That was poetically deep!
thraxbaby chapter 2 . 11/7/2010
Very Cool!
MikomiShizuka chapter 2 . 11/3/2010

I love you. xDD

I'm nearly speechless so I can't think of anything else to say.