Reviews for Into The Deep
paragod chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I would love to see where you will take this if you continued it. I love it so far...

Thanks,
V
kinsano chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Wow, I really, really liked this!
dbpbatm chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Great little read!
EmmaLeighL chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Yes, I would enjoy seeing this expanded, perhaps into a short story. Congrats on the win!
phiaLee chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This is a reeeaaaalllyyyyy good story ...please add more chapters ! Very well written and an original storyline - I have never seen one like it before
Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Please, pleaase, please add more! I love this story
calbers chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
What an incredible idea. Never have I read another like it. Wow,wow, wow.
KNG1986 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I have to admit when Edward was turning into a tree I was laughing my ass off. Too bad it was just a dream. Maybe he will treat his mother and women in general better now?
star574 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Heh. Wouldn't it be fun if a trapped male underwent a sex change and became a female nymph?
AwesomeGirl101 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
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afjklgsdfhjkdslhgjk chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
I have to admit, I got really freaked out when Edward turned into a tree. :)
readingmama chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Wow, a well deserved win. I loved how he was such a dick and so he turned into a tree. Men and their cocks, sheesh. Loved it.
keitachibana chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
You are working on a new story ? *happy dance !*

Sorry I am so late to read and review.

Absolutely love nymph-lla and humanward to continue their story!

I dont think he can resist to go to the woods to find her anyway heehee

Good job sweetie, this story totally deserve the first place.

Congras and well done *clap hands*
bspest04 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
wow, i absolutely LOVED this... while I agree with some of the reviews that it does kind of feel complete... I also can't deny that I would LOVE to see more done with this story! Its so intriguing, and to be honest, I can't really get it out of my head... hopefully, you'll do more with it :)
etherium chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I've read Set in Stone and I'm reading In Darkness and Light. Both are really great. I don't usually review, but I wanted to let you know that I enjoy your writing greatly. Into the Deep is an intriguing story and so perfect for Halloween. Excellent! (I'm not sure it needs to be continued or expanded.. it sorta feels complete as it is..)
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