|Reviews for Commands and Caresses|
| RuGrimm chapter 1 . 3/9
*cough cough* I apologize for Zora's misconception. She is a colleague of mine from my roleplay site and I told her about your fanfiction and that I had an account. Apparently she thought I wrote it, cuz it was on my profile page, but didn't notice it was under FAVORITES. At any rate, I still commend you for such a wonderful piece of art. If you call yourself a weak writer, then what in the name of the mother of the muffin man does that make everyone else?! (Including me!) You are like a writing GOD *bows*
| Zora4995 chapter 2 . 3/8
...you are not who I thought you were... awkward... anyway, I still think it's really good!
| Zora4995 chapter 1 . 3/8
WOW. Starr, that was REALLY good! I mean, I thought it would be good from your stuff on LOA, but that was just... *gives you a standing ovation* (this is Sicaria, by the way)
| RuGrimm chapter 63 . 3/4
Wow, is all I can say. Before I begin, let me introduce myself as Raven (as my name on here is only the way it is cuz every other name I have has been taken). I am, obviously, a die-hard Kuroshitsuji fan, and it is quite literally the only thing I read. To be frank, I have never liked Grell x Undertaker, or Will x Ronald. However, after reading such a beautiful story that has been wonderfully written and almost perfect, you've left me stunned and I've become rather fond of the pairings (Will x Ronnie mostly). As far as I can tell, there were few grammatical errors or spelling errors, which is actually surprising after 63 effing chapters. SIXTY THREE (*echo, echo, echo*). For just a quick, future reference though, a masseuse is a female massage therapist/doctor/thingamagig/whatchamacallit/whatever. A masseur is the male ;). Anyways, there were no plot holes as far as I can see, that after SIXTY THREE chapters, I will now walk away from my tablet and bow, because I know of no other author, that does not write for a living, that can actually pull that off. Hats off to you :). Also, I find that there is a constant use of large, unknown words, and trust me when I say that even though I am an editor and aspiring author, I know very little big words. However, I had a great time looking up these words, because that means not only was the story amazing, it had also become educational. Books and novels are literary works, and were designed to enhance the reader's understanding of words and things in the literary field, and you have met this criteria. Even though I sound educated and know-it-all, trust me, I have never spoken above a 6th grade level, and when I write my own novels and try to use big words, I look at the thesaurus to find synonyms, and then use the biggest word I can find, even if I have no idea what it means lol. So the fact you used big words like that deserves another bow.
I have literally saved this on all of my computers, and my tablet. I know this may seem like a durastic hyperbole, but I am quite serious when I say I have read this a million times. If I could, I would have sent this to my publisher, because you are THAT talented. I am a very critical person when it comes to stories and fanfiction; so much that I have yet to publish anything, because I hate my stories so much I trash them after 2-3 chapters. It is extremely hard for someone to get me to like their story, and even more so for me to use my own time to write a review. So the fact you got me to write all this only solidifies the fact you are very talented. After the fact you haven't updated anything in nearly 2 years, I'm not sure if you can read this, or if you can reply, but if you do see this, just know that you are an artist, in author sense, and this story has truly captured my heart. If you want to reply, but can't through your fanfiction (for some reason unbeknownst to me), my email is . Thank you for spending your precious time to read such a long review, and for writing such a beautiful tale. My only regret is that you never finished SSF, as I still wonder how it would have ended. (That's a bit of an understatement, as I broke down and cried into my pillow cuz it was so effing fantastic and it wasn't finished. GOD EFF YOU, YOU RUINED MY LIFE! Nah, jk, but seriously, I really wish you would finish such an amazing story)
| Guest chapter 63 . 2/16
I absolutely love this story, I just can't stop re-reading it! You are an amazing writer m'dear and I can't help but fall in love with your writing. This was one of the most beautiful things I've read in my entire life. Keep up the splendid job, and I'm definitely reading the sequel!
-UD (Initials) 3
| Cake-Otaku chapter 26 . 2/2
That was bloody awesome... Though I honestly wished I hadn't been eating bread with cherry and strawberry marmalade.
| kanamegirl chapter 64 . 10/7/2013
I love this story sooooooooooo good! I felt like an emotional train wreck while reading this but I loved it :) I've already read this story 4 times !
| emerald-abyss chapter 59 . 10/2/2013
Okay, so despite what I've seen you post, that you're not that great of a writer, let me put those fears to rest. THIS STORY IS OUT OF THIS WORLD! So good! The pot twist, the romance, the action-which omg was awesome, it all works perfectly together. I couldn't stop reading, seriously, I was up for about two days haha. ANyways Congratulations on this!
| annethepyro chapter 50 . 7/27/2013
| zebracakess37 chapter 63 . 7/18/2013
This is the all time best story I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing it. It's absolutely amazing. 3
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/29/2013
This chapter...Made me cry so hard. Amazing writing
| YaoiFangirl99 chapter 25 . 4/15/2013
I died a teeny bit on the inside after reading this chapter... Your work is amazing... I fangirl, get all tingly in some parts, and CRY LIKE HELL. XD Your a better writer than ill ever be. XD
| MapleVamp chapter 63 . 2/24/2013
this is the single best written undertaker/grell fiction i have had the pleasure of reading i am looking forward to what you write in the future :D
| Don'tSleep chapter 63 . 12/17/2012
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FLUFF EVER! 8D
Maverrat, I worship you. Not only do you write a masterpiece, it is also long, well-crafted, unforced, and truly amazing.
This is my second time reading it and I have to say, this piece, no, this work of art, only gets better with repetition. 8D
| Don'tSleep chapter 56 . 12/16/2012
"Giving you the bird." William said dryly
XD XDD This whole chapter made me laugh as much as Undertaker normally does XD XDD