|Reviews for Jonah Hex: Shades of Gray|
| Clegane chapter 15 . 7/5
Great cgapter! And poor Mother Worm
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 14 . 10/2/2013
First off, the obvious: Don't let canon screw you up when you're doing just fine the way you are. Next, I can see little hints of the ring developing. Its thoughts seem more 'nuanced' even if its vocabulary hasn't increased any. But I am wondering why 'Will' wasn't sufficient for Jonah to force a connection with the dead gang member and he had to rely on 'Hate' instead. (I can see Jonah getting use out of 'Hate' and 'Fear', but have no idea if he'll be able to get anything out of 'Greed'. Jonah has never struck me as a particularly greedy person.)
Looking forward to whatever you've got up your sleeves.
| Kyubbiman chapter 13 . 8/15/2013
I love this story please keep the chapters coming. Jonah Hex with a lantern ring that's a scary combination
| mikewebb1211 chapter 13 . 8/2/2013
I have to say, I'm enjoying this story. Everything about it is reigniting my interest in Jonah Hex. Keep it up and update ASAP please!
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 13 . 6/9/2013
As long as they don't got those things from 'Tremors', I think they'll be alright. Although it's clear the term Dragon Sweat is a more literal description than it might be otherwise.
Nice to see you back. Hope the professional work is going well.
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/6/2013
I really like this, please continue.
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 12 . 2/5/2013
I like how you used existing canon to give Jonah connections to the here and now. I doubt most folks would have remembered Vigilante's time in the past or Max Mercury's history either. I also like how you implied that Vigilante would be tutoring Jonah on the here and now without getting bogged down in meaningless details. Looking forward to Narcocorrido. I just hope I don't have to wait -too- long. 8)
| Storyteller222 chapter 12 . 2/1/2013
Ah good to see that you got off your but and did a double update Ms. Hillwig
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 10 . 6/10/2012
An excellent ending to this story arc. (Though one delayed long enough that I was worrying about it ever coming.) Particularly liked the idea that 'being at peace' doesn't mean being non-existant. I look forward to seeing what the 'New Normal' will be for a man who spent over a century dead. Also, I expect the Black Ring to grow and develop over the course of the story. While it may be Jonah's 'student' now, I don't think it will remain that way forever.
| Storyteller222 chapter 10 . 6/6/2012
Wait I'm confused
| Storyteller222 chapter 9 . 6/6/2012
Ah it's good to hear from you Susan, I'm happy for your novel
| tomstedham chapter 8 . 6/4/2012
| Storyteller222 chapter 8 . 8/15/2011
Wow just wow, this is beyond impressive. Please contact me soon, I want to talk.
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 4 . 12/25/2010
I can see that Jonah is being very conservative (by his standards) when dealing with the here and now. Otherwise, there'd be two more dead. But this is clearly not going to be the last conflict between modern Rules of Engagement and the ones he is more familiar with. He needs a chance to further orient himself (a week in a library with someone who believes his story would be a good start), but I can see he's not going to get it. Carry on.
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Spooky good. Professional grade. Get a job in the comics industry. Do not pass 'Go', do collect a lot more than $200.